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The girl of my dreams

O, there she goes the girl of my dreams . She is every mans dream. She is brilliant, beautiful, and just o my god perfect there is no other word for her but that. O I wish she was mine, but no she has her jerk boyfriend, all he is, is an @$$ hole from another planet. All he thinks about doing is tapin it and then movein on to the next thing that is hot and walks on two legs. I bet she doesn’t even know the things he does behind her back. She disserves better than that better than that jerk, but how would I tell her, she would never listen to someone like me, but she disserves me I could give her any and everything she ever wanted. I know, I’ll tell her at her party. ( party night) When I walked in I went upstairs walking by each and every room that was in the house and noticing that the jerk had finally tapped something but not the girl of my dreams. In one slash and a scream it was all over. I walked down stairs when everybody was getting ready to leave everybody just stared I don’t know I fit was because of the lifeless body that was hanging in my arm or the fact that I had blood covering the entire front of my shirt and my hands, or maybe it was both. Then came the screams of so many people even the jerk who happened to be screaming like a fat pig. The only one not screaming for there life was the one lying lifeless in my arms. It was fast you know one slash and then she fell into my arms like we were dancing, I had finally given her what she disserved, and I finally got what I have always wanted.

The girl of my dreams.

 

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Tags: myhead  Added 2008-04-18 13:29:09
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thats hella crazy u should do lyke a sequel or sumthin kudos


2008-06-01 15:57:08


beautiful!well written!!!

2008-05-06 12:55:29


oo man, i like it :)

2008-04-29 13:24:03


it kinda has a happy ending though most people would choose a different way to get the girl/guy of their dreams^^ *pop*

2008-04-18 20:11:43


Very dark, but very good


2008-04-18 14:41:19


Beutifull i love it

2008-04-18 13:47:49


this is based off of some reality things that I have heard about before. Enjoy

2008-04-18 13:29:54


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