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when i leave,
when i go,
i always think of her
i hold her tighly,
before i have to go she starts to cry
i wipe her tear off ,
as mine falls on her face ,
i couldnt let her go
i wasnt going to let her go
i held her tighly until it hurted
i let go as a tear falls from my face
i climb into the truck with my hand on the window staring at her
as i turn the corner and last time i ever saw her face agian
so cool........did something like this happen to you?
*cries, really truly cries* darn, i wish you was my B/f. that was sweet.
if you put the poem into stanzas it would flow better
aww this poem is so honest it leaks true heart felt loooove
wow*snif* that is so good ^_^
wow!! *applause* iu ove this poem!!!
i love it, it sounds very realistic, did u went through something like this? hurts like hell, *POP*
LARUA
02.22.2008 12:26 AM