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when i leave

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when i leave

when i leave,

when i go,

i always think of her

i hold her tighly,

before i have to go she starts to cry

i wipe her tear off ,

as mine falls on her face ,

i couldnt let her go

i wasnt going to let her go

i held her tighly until it hurted

i let go as a tear falls from my face

 i climb into the truck with my hand on the window staring at her

as i turn the corner and last time i ever saw her  face agian  

 

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i love it, it sounds very realistic, did u went through something like this? hurts like hell, *POP*

02.22.2008 12:26 AM


so cool........did something like this happen to you?

01.10.2008 10:47 PM


*cries, really truly cries* darn, i wish you was my B/f. that was sweet.

08.27.2007 01:00 PM


if you put the poem into stanzas it would flow better

08.21.2007 04:12 PM


aww this poem is so honest it leaks true heart felt loooove

07.06.2007 01:25 PM


wow*snif* that is so good ^_^

07.06.2007 12:15 PM


wow!! *applause* iu ove this poem!!!

07.05.2007 02:29 PM


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