ART + LIFE
soldiers death
kingdoms at war,
soldies prepare for battle,
young lovers will die.....
young love of eighteen,
he will triumph in battle,
to see her again.....
charging towards the mass,
death arrows rain from heaven,
he kneels to the floor.....
sweet blood of crimson
falls into the clear puddle,
his pulse, dropping.....
with his sword in hand
he lies starring into
the big blue sky.....
his life is fading,
his soul waits in the heavens,
to see her again.....
umm, i helped my brother make this and he's gone, so i posted this for him.... but i hope people will like this....=]
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Sad,but it's good.
LIEFHART
2007-08-22 19:17:43
speechless...
IZUMISAN
2007-08-14 18:37:31
It's so sad... it makes me think what she's doing at that moment, like if she could sorta sense there's something wrong you know... hmm...
ANGIEHUYNH
2007-08-13 16:15:44
WOW! better than what i can do. really good
HAKU303
2007-08-13 13:00:42
That was so beautiful...I loved it.
ANGELZANE
2007-08-13 12:35:03
That was awesome!You sounded like a real poet!
BUNBUN93
2007-08-13 12:05:11
aww. omg, that was beautiful! i almost cried, i kid you not. this is really good.
XOXOG
2007-08-13 12:04:41