This piece was sent to the tokyo pop manga competition so it had to be a 15-20 page story, so that's whay everything may seem cramed in lol

ANICACHAN

2008-07-16 17:51:47

This piece was sent to the tokyo pop manga competition so it had to be a 15-20 page story, so that's whay everything may seem cramed in lol

ANICACHAN

2008-07-16 17:51:45

I like it a lot...but I do have one question... is it supposed to be that rushed? I mean I guess I get use to reading the common romance manga where it takes FOREVER for the two lovebirds to come together but it seemed here they got together in no time...

KIBASFANG

2008-05-27 05:41:17

I love the overall style! Here's a pop!

TAKAMITSUKAI

2008-05-16 22:46:32

i love the story but there are patrs where you just jumped from one thing to the other.how it looks has a lot to do with how popular a manga is becouse most people judge it by its cover but for it to be popular the story has to be clearer

MANGAFAN240

2008-05-15 17:23:43

I love it. i think the problem is that its kind of jumbled. at some points i can't understand whats going on because of the closeness. Also i think two of the characters look the same. but thats my opinion. maybe you should keep one hair style for each because its a bit confusing. I think the characters are well drawn though.

YURENA

2008-05-03 18:52:07

omigod. that's awesome! please finish the story!!! *pop!!*

ANIME96

2008-05-03 14:40:39

you rock continue with the story pleeeeezz!! Love yr artwork and dedication too!!

XXXDARKANGELXXX

2008-05-03 06:59:35

I really love the scenery and shadow effects!

JZENNIFER

2008-05-01 09:26:11

i absolutely love your screentoning skillz.

YUYREN

2008-04-27 00:29:47

love the cat look!

MEWBLUEBERRIE

2008-04-22 19:11:06

Oh My Jeebus! It's totally awesome! There are some little bits that could be adjusted but other than that I love it! If you make more I'll definitly read them. :)

MANGAMAKER23

2008-04-21 18:27:50

Oh My Jeebus! It's totally awesome! There are some little bits that could be adjusted but other than that I love it! If you make more I'll definitly read them. :)

MANGAMAKER23

2008-04-21 18:27:39

I was gonna say you did a pretty good job but .. but all my but's are already mentioned below ... panel layout etc.

YUMIYAHACHIMAN

2008-04-21 01:13:10

I loved this!! Some parts were very difficult to understand what was going on, though. Even though, the art is really really good!! :D

BUNNYBOY86

2008-04-20 22:21:33