Page1

 

Panel1- A birds eye view of a high school along with all the property around it. Narrator: Kirby Lee High.

 

Panel2- Looking through a window, the reader sees a young man with long hair in a fringe that appears to be drifting off. Narrator: Our hero, Noah.

 

Panel3- A younger Noah plays a violin. Narrator: Truly an articulate child, he started playing the violin at the age of only five years old. He is also skilled at guitar and the cello.

 

Panel4- With a palette and brush in his hands, he stands in front of a painting of two kissing lovers during a full moon. Narrator: His skills in art have earned him much local and state fame…

 

Panel5- Noah sits upon a park bench on a sunny day writing in a small notebook. Narrator: … as well as his writings.

 

Panel6- Walking down the halls of the school, he stares down at the floor looking depressed because of the people far off pointing and laughing. Narrator: He’s never had a good social life and has never been seen with a girl. For this the other call him “Emo    fagot” or “Emogot” for short.

 

Page2

 

Panel1- The bell rings.

 

Panel2- The entire class gets up while the teacher is still talking. Teacher: Alright class

That’s it for the day. Tomorrow we’ll go over the mummification process.

 

Panel3- Noah walks through the hallway not noticing the guy screaming and waving behind him. Guy: Yo Noah! Wait up!

 

Panel4- The two are now walking side by side. Noah: What do ya want Lex? Lex: First: stop calling me that.

 

Panel5- Noah’s at his locker, grabs a book out of his bag and places it in his locker. Lex: Second: You go’n to the game tonight?

 

Panel6- Noah slams his locker shot. Noah: A bunch of muscle bond idiots running around, crashing into each other? No thanks.

 

Panel7- The two walk out the front doors.

 

Pgae3

 

Panel1- The two are meters away from the school. The background is filled with high school student talking. Lex seems annoyed with Noah. Lex: Do you ever leave your f***ing house?!

 

Panel2- Noah stares and a sweat drop shows up on Lex’s head.

 

Panel3- Noah still stares. Noah: Would I be here now if I did? Noah (thinking): Note to self: Perform brain transplant on Lex.

 

Panel4- A shooting star is whizzing through the sky.

 

Panel5- The two tilt their heads back to watch, they are engulfed in shadow.

 

Panel6- A close up of Noah and Lex’s faces from a side view with more emphases on Noah’s. Noah (thinking): I wish something interesting would happen for once.

 

Panel7- A cheerleader is walking on the sidewalk, in front of a covariance store. She’s listening to music with her eyes closed.

 

Panel8- The star’s coming down faster.

 

Panel9- A side view of the girl, the star and the store.

 

Panel10- The star hits the girl in the chest and she screams in pain.

 

Panel11- She falls back to the ground hard.

 

Panel12- The Cheerleader lies there, passed out on the sidewalk. The star had burned through most of her clothes.

 

Open Panel1- A hand picks up the star. Person:

 

Page4

 

Panel1- Noah and Lex are walking in front of the store. Lex: … Seriously! You can see the f***er’s brain and… Noah (thinking): Jan Valentine?

 

Panel2- Lex is pushed aside by a paramedic. Paramedic: Otta the way! Lex: …Shit!

 

Panel3- Noah points forward. Noah: look.

 

Panel4- Lex is on the ground getting up. Lex: At what?

 

Panel5- A close up of Lex’s head looking to the right.

 

Panel6- The cheerleader is on a stretcher and is being put in the back of an ambulance by two paramedics.

 

Panel7- Lex is now back on his feet and patting off all the dust. Lex: Wonder what happened? Noah: Dose it matter.

 

Panel8- The two face the street preparing to cross. Lex: Guess not.

 

Panel9- The two are in the middle of the road. We see them from a crane shot view.

 

Panel10- The two are now on the other side.

 

Panel11- The friends wave good bye. Lex: Latter man. Noah: See ya.

 

Panel12- Noah stand in front of his house, a normal looking suburban home.

 

Panel13- He squints of eyes as if staring hard at something.

 

Panel14- There’s a note on the door, but we can’t see it.

 

Panel15-The note reads: Noah, Won’t be home till late, Love Mom.

 

Panel16- He sighs as he opens the door.

 

Panel17- We see the inside of Noah’s living room, shrouded in shadows with only a few pieces of furniture.

 

 

Page5

 

Panel1- Noah steps in and closes the door behind him.

 

Panel2- He walks through a dark hallway.

 

Panel3- He stands in the kitchen.

 

Panel4- He puts his hand around the refrigerator handle.

Panel5- He opens the fridge.

 

Panel6- His arm reaches in.

 

Panel7- He takes out a bottle.

 

Panel8- He drinks, emphases should be used on the neck to show him drinking.

 

Panel9- He exhales in refreshment.

 

Panel10- He tosses the bottle over his shoulder.

 

Page6

 

Panel1- The bottle lands in the trash.

 

Panel2, 3&4- He walks up to his bedroom.

 

Panel5- He sits in front of his computer.

 

Panel6- He picks up the remote.

 

Panel7- He presses the power button.

 

Panel8- The T.V. comes on; the news appears on the screen.

 

Panel9- Noah sits at his computer, the sounds of the keys and the T.V. can be heard. News Reporter: We are here live at Jump City town square were there seems to be some como… urrhha!

 

Panel10- Noah turns his head in shock.

 

Page7

 

Panel1- He jumps out of his seat. Noah: Mom?!

 

Panel2- On the T.V. many people can bee seen running through the city in mass panic one person is Noah’s mother.

 

Panel3- Noah grabs a motorcycle helmet off his dresser.

 

Panel4- He flies off the stairs.

 

Panel5- He hits the floor and crouches “Spider-Man style”

 

Panel6- A close up of his helmeted face, we can see his eye, very intense.

 

Page8

 

Panel1- He stands in front of a motorcycle covered by a white sheet.

 

Panel2- He stars to pull it off.

 

Panel3- He throws the sheet aside.

 

Panel4- He hops on the bike.

 

Panel5- He rides off at full speed.

 

Page9

 

Panel1- Noah rides into the destroyed city.

 

Panel2- A close up of his front tire as he stops, it kicks up a lot of dust.

 

Panel3- He walks through the ruins. Noah: Hellooo?! Is any one here?!

 

Panel4- He gets hit with what appears to be a large glowing palm palm.

 

Page10

 

Panel1- He’s flying through the air. Noah: What the ----

 

Panel2- The palm-palm explodes near his stomach.

 

Panel3- He’s falling hard.

 

Panel4- He hits the ground, leaving giant puddles of blood near his body.

 

Panel5- His body lays motionless, face planted in the ground.

 

Panel6- His arm begins to twitch.

 

Panel7- He gets kick in the stomach and gets sent up a foot in the air.

 

Page11

 

Panel1- Once again on the ground, his face is all cut up.

Panel2- A figure shrouded in shadow looks down at our bused and battered hero.

 

Panel3- The figure raises her leg up.

 

Panel4- She puts her foot down on Noah’s throat.

 

Panel5- Noah coughs up blood

 

Panel6- A close up of Noah’s opening eyes.

 

Page12

 

Panel1- He grabs the figure by the ankle.

 

Panel2- He throws the figure off of him.

 

Panel3- The figure lands perfectly on her feet.

 

Panel4- Noah’s back on his feet, but he’s having trouble standing. He’s breathing heavily and there’s blood running all over his face. Noah: Just who the hell do you are? You bastard!

 

Panel5- The figure just stands and stares.

 

Page13

 

Panel1- The figure starts to walk away. Noah: Where do you think you’re go’n?!

 

Panel2- Noah stands in the same spot, hunched over, smiling, with blood drenching his entire body.

 

Panel3- A close up shot of Noah’s screaming mouth. Noah: Come back here you coward!

 

Panel4- The figure just stands and stares.

 

Panel5- The figure disappears in the blink of an eye.

 

 

Page14

 

Panel1- The figure appears in front on the beaten Noah.

 

Panel2- The figure flicks Noah in the forehead.

 

Panel3- The impact causes Noah to fall.

 

Page15-16

 

Panel1- Noah lies on the ground, defeated as the figure stares.

 

Page17

 

Panel1- Surrounded by darkness Noah stands as a superhero holding his helmet under his arm.

 

Panel2- Noah jumps up, there are tubes sticking out of his arms and bandages covering his head.

 

Panel3- He looks to his lefty and to his right.

 

Panel7&8- There’s medical equipment all around him.

 

Page18

 

Panel1- Sitting up in a hospital bed, holding up his head, Noah’s breathing and sweating heavily.

 

Panel2- An image of a “henshin” transformation belt flashes in his mind.

 

Panel3- His hands over his eyes, he’s squeezing his head tightly.

 

Panel4- The hero’s helmet flashes through his mind.

 

Panel5- Noah screams in agony.

 

Page19

 

Panel1- Noah sits with mouth a gape and his eyes, soulless.

 

Panel2- The hero stands in darkness with flames engulfing his body.

 

End of Chapter 0