[Inside the dojo] Rio-sensei: Alright everyone get into sparing pairs now. [All kids get into groups of two except a young Gin and a girl with medium long crimson hair] Gin, Maya, you two team up.
Gin and Maya [disappointed]: Aww man I gotta team up with him/her!
Rio-sensei: Now now children, no need to get upset. So tell me what exactly is the problem her?
Gin: Maya cheats sensei! She always trips people.
Maya: That’s a load, sensei don’t trust that irritable little klutz bastard. He’s constantly making excuses.
Gin: Klu.. Klu.. KLUTZ BASTARD!! The Hells a klutz bastard?
Maya: You’re a klutz bastard, and a klutz bastard is you. Got that kohai?
Gin: Ko? Hai? I’m five years older than you!
Maya: Five years older, and five inches shorter. Eh.. Chibi-chan.
Gin: That’s it witch! You and me in the ring RIGHT NOW!
Maya: Fine. Bring it Chibi-chan.
Rio-sensei: Gin! Geki Ken Ryu is not meant to be used for revenge, nor competition. Especially against nakama.
Gin: NAKAMA!? THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT SENSEI!? Why the hell would I be nakama with a flat chested bitch like her?
Maya: What.. Did… Say?…… You little SHRIMP!!
Random Girl: No Maya, you shouldn’t.
Maya: LET ME AT ‘EM!LET ME AT ‘EM!! Urgh! It’s fine Sensei, I’ll take him. In fact I believe this will be over in just 52 seconds.
Gin: Alright ya flat chested bitch pick up the sword. This time I won’t let you cheat your way to win! Hmmm.
Maya [whispers]: I’m gonna make you eat those words.. You BITCH!!
Gin/Maya [yelling]: YeAhhH!!!
GinMaya [In the fight]: Various shouts, heavy breathing, and the sound of wooden swords clashing.
Maya [Slips]: Woah!
Gin: Now’s my chance. HeYaaaa. [Runs as fast as possible lifting his sword. He stops and taps Maya gently on the head with his sword] Yessssss! I finally won! I finally Won! [sob]
[Maya walks up to Gin and taps him on the shoulder, he turns around]
Maya: [Presents her hand to Gin] (Blushes): G… Goo. God job>
Gin [Smiles and high fives Maya]: Hmm thanks. [Looks at her chest] (whispers) There’s still nothing there.
[Maya smacks him in the back of the head]
Gin: Oww!!
[The 2 smile at each other and laugh]
End
A re:edit of ABSN chapter one. Turned into a stand alone story has nothing to do with the original.
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Amusing and cute...... much too much swearing for my taste.
GRINZOR
2007-09-01 23:46:04
It turned out pretty good. The ending is funny and cute- well done!
AIRICHAN
2007-08-29 11:06:30