It was in a dark room that this tale all started. In two oranate chairs a man and woman sat in silence. Hovering in the background several shadowy figures stood patiently waiting. They knew better than to proud their leaders for there decision would be important to their future of them all. Up on a giant screen were four pictures of several lovely girls. Each girl had been under survalience for almost a year and every aspect of her life had been recorded. Now the time had come for one of them to be chosen. Finally the woman spoke. "That girl," she said pointing to the picture of the youngest of the four girls. This girl had blond hair, blue green eyes, glasses, and a radiant smile. "I agree with you perfectly my dear," the man said, "Whats more here closest friend has been chosen to be the heir of our sister clan." "Preciesly," the woman said with a smile,"At long last both of our clans wil at last be rejoined and when they are.." "NO ONE will be able to stop us!," the man said with triumlp. The man turned and said "Mad Hatter are all the preparations complete?' "Yes Red KIng everything has been prepared for the Heir," The Mad Hatter replied. "Very well then Tweedles Dee and Dum!" "Yes sir?" the twins chorused. "Fetch our Heir at once! White Rabbit go with them and insure that nothng goes wrong!" "Yes sire." Oh and Caterpillar send word to the WHite King and Queen to inform them of our decision." "Yes sire." "At last,' The red queen murmured,"An Alice will be returned to WOnderland."
To Be Continued........
This is an idea for a story so tell me what you think! All Criticsim welcome!
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hey thats really good
NAEZIE1993
2008-03-17 01:16:28
its cool
DRZEMA
2007-10-13 14:49:58
That is pretty good. It's like mystery and suspence put together.I read a LOT of books and I think this would make a wonderful one. Keep writing your really good at it.
CAITLIN37394
2007-10-12 17:09:40