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The lake

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The lake

She went to the lake to seal her fate

 

She thought to her self it was to late

 

For any one to help her anymore

 

She dove in the water and hit the bottom floor

 

 Every thing went dark there was no light

 

Then some pulled her out and made her see the light

 

No she said I don’t want to put up a fight

 

She woke up and saw them standing there

 

She screamed its not fair

 

I wanted to die

 

They asked why?

 

Because my boyfriend broke my heart

 

He new he was going to do that from the start

 

They said he wasn’t wroth your life

 

That you could find some the would treat you right

 

Then she said are you crazy no one would want me

 

Look girl listen to me and look right at me

 

You must be out of your mind

 

Because that’s life and it happens to people all the time


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Written by ronald and me I hope you like it plaese tell me what you think

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who's ''Ronald''?

10.13.2007 01:31 PM


Wow!!! Its great!!!

10.09.2007 07:04 PM


oh wow i love the message it gives plz ppl not throw away their lives *pop*

10.09.2007 12:39 PM


Wow, that's Kitty alright. Something like that almost happened to her, but she ok now.^^

10.05.2007 01:37 PM


i like the message it gives

10.04.2007 06:41 PM


I agree with the ending, people should not throw away their lives for a breakup >

10.04.2007 03:54 PM


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