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I wish you would die and I hate you
Meet me here and you better come to
That’s what I said to him because we had just fought
My mind was lost in my thought
That he had cheated on me then I found out that’s it wasn’t true
I was relived and happy too
I was going to apologize to him and we were supposed to have met
At the tower but the sun started to set
I waited but he never showed
It was raining and very cold
So I decide to go home alone
Then when I got home I heard the phone
I answered then I screamed this is a trick
The my heart felt like it didn’t even tick
Then I knew
That my wish had came true
I started to cry
Then I screamed why!
Then two weeks later I was crying
I felt like my soul and heart were dying
While I watched his casket go into the ground
No one even made a sound
I set there alone saying why……
Why did you have to die
An leave me here all alone
With no soul and a heart of stone
awww.....how sad....but very good!
It's full of sadness and anger.
You're amazing!
if ive said it once ive said it again, nicely done =)
As they say. You are very good. I wish I could write beautiful poems expressing what I feel. And what me and others experienced.
u really are (agreeing with comment below . . . by the way) u r! u r!
You are very good at writing poems!! ^_^
oh my so good *pop*
Awww...THat's so sad, good but sad, and true in way. That's why there's that saying "The human tounge speaks life or death" I presume.^^
Very good, loved the ending, keep writing.
Hope you like this one . Please tell me what you think