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I wish

I wish you would die and I hate you

Meet me here and you better come to

That’s what I said to him because we had just fought

My mind was lost in my thought

That he had cheated on me then I found out that’s it wasn’t true

I was relived and happy too

I was going to apologize to him and we were supposed to have met

At the tower but the sun started to set

I waited but he never showed

It was raining and very cold

So I decide to go home alone

Then when I got home I heard the phone

I answered then I screamed this is a trick

The my heart felt like it didn’t even tick

Then I knew

That my wish had came true

I started to cry

Then I screamed why!

Then two weeks later I was crying

I felt like my soul and heart were dying

While I watched his casket go into the ground

No one even made a sound

I set there alone saying why……

Why did you have to die

An leave me here all alone

With no soul and a heart of stone


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awww.....how sad....but very good!

11.14.2007 06:59 PM


It's full of sadness and anger.

11.14.2007 08:32 AM


You're amazing!

11.13.2007 01:59 PM


if ive said it once ive said it again, nicely done =)

10.28.2007 12:32 PM


As they say. You are very good. I wish I could write beautiful poems expressing what I feel. And what me and others experienced.

10.10.2007 03:09 AM


u really are (agreeing with comment below . . . by the way) u r! u r!

10.09.2007 11:43 PM


You are very good at writing poems!! ^_^

10.09.2007 01:15 PM


oh my so good *pop*

10.09.2007 12:54 PM


Awww...THat's so sad, good but sad, and true in way. That's why there's that saying "The human tounge speaks life or death" I presume.^^

10.05.2007 01:43 PM


Very good, loved the ending, keep writing.

10.04.2007 03:58 PM


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