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I was walking in the mall
It was around when the leaves start to fall
I was walking the I stopped then I saw his eyes
The were staring straight at me to my surprise
Such kind eyes so nice too see
I looked and smiled at him because I knew he was looking at me
I got scared and started to run fast
I knew the relationship would never last
But then he grabbed my arm
But I knew he wasn’t going to do any harm
Then we started to walk away together
We knew that our love would last forever
wow i really liked this one
Aww, I love it! This ones happier then the last love one.^^ I love it!
i like it....
It actually sweet/not bad
not bad :)
I love this poem!
awww...i love it!
awwwww!!! how sweet, love at first sight, Keep writing! : )
only you can make such a nice poem =)
i love it. =]
Fright poem.
Nice poem!!! Its so sweet.
thats not bad (betttr than mine haha)
Sweet Poem
AW that wuz nice
Drew dared me to wirte a love and happy poem. Well Drew I guess I won. LOL