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My only Love Poem

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My only Love Poem

I was walking in the mall

It was around when the leaves start to fall

I was walking the I stopped then I saw his eyes

The were staring straight at me to my surprise

Such kind eyes so nice too see

I looked and smiled at him because I knew he was looking at me

I got scared and started to run fast

I knew the relationship would never last

But then he grabbed my arm

But I knew he wasn’t going to do any harm

Then we started to walk away together

We knew that our love would last forever


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Drew dared me to wirte a love and happy poem. Well Drew I guess I won. LOL

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wow i really liked this one

08.01.2008 04:47 PM


Aww, I love it! This ones happier then the last love one.^^ I love it!

05.28.2008 01:49 PM


i like it....

01.16.2008 01:46 AM


It actually sweet/not bad

12.18.2007 11:22 AM


not bad :)

11.20.2007 07:50 PM


I love this poem!

11.14.2007 08:28 AM


awww...i love it!

11.12.2007 01:59 PM


awwwww!!! how sweet, love at first sight, Keep writing! : )

10.28.2007 06:22 PM


only you can make such a nice poem =)

10.28.2007 12:30 PM


i love it. =]

10.24.2007 12:51 PM


Fright poem.

10.22.2007 01:26 PM


Nice poem!!! Its so sweet.

10.21.2007 07:11 AM


thats not bad (betttr than mine haha)

10.14.2007 01:43 AM


Sweet Poem

10.11.2007 06:49 PM


AW that wuz nice

10.11.2007 04:38 PM


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