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Angle/demon of death

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Angle/demon of death

Chapter One

                                                          Fait

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

         I was walking through the dark hallway .With my little feet hitting the creaking wood floors holding my teddy bear then going down the stair. In my little white dress. Then I walk outside to the garden and see my mother. Then I say it can’t be you your dead. You died ten years a go. I look down at the pound and say this can’t be I am a little girl again. Come here my dear little Eshter. I go to her even though I am scared I go. Come here and sit on my lap mother said and I did. My dear Esther you have a great destiny that awaits you. I don’t have much time left but if don’t remember anything I told remember this always go by your gut instinct and always follow your heart. Good bye. No I said mommy don’t leave me. (Beep Beep Beep) huh what it was only a dream? I better get dressed or I will be late for school. Esther!!!! Mike called isn’t today your 16 birthday. Thud hey why did you always does that. Mike he is 17 has been my best friend since I was little. Every one likes him and thinks he’s hot but he’s gay. No one nose it but me. We both don’t have any parents. His died in a car accident. My mother’s heart gave out. I don’t know who my dad is. Here is your present. A LETTER!!!!! I said and mike said read it first you dummy. I will make you lunch for a whole year. THANK YOU I screamed. I can’t cook at all.                  School was the same as usually until we were walking home and I saw a kid playing with a ball the ball fell in to the street and a car was coming. Mean while A boy was sitting the watching saying poor little boy I guess your time is up in 3…..2….1. What?  No Esther Mike said I ran and pushed the boy out of the way and got hit by the car. Ever one was whispering I was coved in blood. Then all of a sudden time stopped a boy with blonde hair almost white and gray-blue eyes that made him look sad with black angel wings looked at me and said you’re almost dead. He said to me what a bright green eyes you have with that black curly hair. Right now I decide whether you live or die. I am the angle of death. You know that boy was supposed to die not you. Let me ask you this question why? What do you mean why? Why did you save that boy?  Do you how old he is? Yes 5 why? I am 11years older than him I have lived a great life and so should he. He looked at me and said you the only person I have seen done this kind deed for no selfish reasons. He cut his hand and said I will give you your life as along as you have the will to live. He put the blood in his mouth and kissed me that was my first kiss.

                                         

                                    Chapter2

 

         I wake up in a huge bed in a beautiful room. He says are you a wake. Duh I am a wake. Where are we I asked at my home? At your home!!!!!!!!!! What is going on here?  Well I? Saved you and now you are my slave. Huh Ha ha ha ha ha that’s a good one. No way am I going to be you slave. Could you at least take me on a tour? Wow this is huge. Do you live here alone? Yes why? My mom dead giving birth to me. I’m sorry. It is all right. I was born with these black wings instead of horns, tail or bat wings. My dad is the king of the demons I don’t belong to anyone. Even the angels don’t want me either and I don’t believe in fighting for no reason. Just look at me do I scare you? No you look kind of cute. See im suppose to look scary not cute. I’m going home. You cant no one will remember you or see you. It is like you never existed. What!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You got to be joking right? No I am not joking. What is your name Dark. Yours is Esther right? How did you know? Your I.D card give me that fine take it back. Where I’m I going to go? Well I guess you could stay here. What!!!!!! Stay here alone with you!! Are you crazy? You know what I should have let you die.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Creator Comments

here u go tell me what u think ill write more on it i promise and it still has some kinks in it too so you will probally see a new,more better version and more chapters

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Thes two pece of copasishons are very wall don

03.03.2008 06:13 PM


pretty cool.

12.07.2007 08:46 PM


i like alot

12.06.2007 01:15 PM


Interesting Can't wait till the next one!

11.14.2007 07:12 PM


Nice! :)

11.12.2007 11:41 AM


I love this i want to read more. I cant wait til you write the rest!

11.01.2007 06:09 AM


kool story i lov it *pop

10.09.2007 03:41 PM


Nice;P

09.28.2007 10:51 AM


I L-O-V-E IT!!!!! but just need to work on the grammar sorry!

09.23.2007 05:27 PM


its good. a bit hard to read though. not the material but rather the grammar. sorry to be so picky. it was really good though. write the rest please^^

09.21.2007 12:48 PM


love it

09.20.2007 03:07 PM


execlent!! MOAR PLZ!!!

09.19.2007 07:40 PM


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