CanadianIdiot
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CanadianIdiot
Last Login:09.05.16 06:27PM
Real Name: The wolves never gave me one...
Member Since: September 19, 2007
Inspirations: Inspiration for writing fiction stories (Both original and story-based.) began a while ago. I was always told "Oh, you have such an imagination!" and "You should be a director or an author when you grow up!" I decided to sit down one day and just write. I never really did get the sense that I was a great writer, so I gave up for a while. A while later, I get this assignment in school to write a myth. Just an old story about how something came to be. It was then that I wrote such a good story, I decided to post the story online. It became an instant hit and I gained fame. I continued to write stories and am currently in the works of an even greater story. If it works, I guess I'll get something made up for here. I usually make 1-2 stories per website I go to, so I guess I'll get something new on here!
School: Hell
Occupation: God
My Experience: Amateur
I create: Fiction
Favorite Manga: Too many to name. Hmm, some are Death Note, MAR, Undertown, Fullmetal Alchemist, and Kingdom Hearts.
Favorite Music: Rock, Metal, and Alternative! You know, AC/DC, Dragonforce, Green Day, Linkin Park, Metallica, Alter Bridge, My Chemical Romance, Iron Maiden, The Beatles, Smashing Pumpkins, U2, and Garbage
Favorite Movie: Star Wars, without a doubt!
Favorite Book: Eragon
Favorite Sport: HOCKEY!!!
Hobbies: Reading manga, writing, and bike riding.
Do I remember you? How could I forget you! Thanks for your continued support of Undertown! Book two is going to rock.
chapter one.
in the first chapter the beginning is very well written. in one paragraph there is an error i think. you wrote "The four slowly walked into the cart, not keeping their eyes off of them. " shouldnt it be not taking their eyes off of them or keeping their eyes on them?
overall the first chapter is very well written. i like and enjoy it a lot. great job.
chapter 2.
again this chapter is written very well. something thought that i think that you should consider. it seemed that you changed setting or times. it would be easier for me to understand if you stated that there was a time change.
chapter 3.
mysteries are really good. you seem to have a talent at this. better than i knew. great so far. no changes or edits needed that i can catch.
chapter 4.
very nice.
i like all of them a lot. great story line. i hope to hear more.
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JAPAN
awesome news about the Undertown review! Could you scan it in and post it? I would LOVE to read it!
JIMPASCOE
05.22.2008 09:26 AM