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the heart is a heavy burden

you tear me down and build me up,

my heart like putty in your willing hands.

you have another, one who builds you,

but i cannot tell her, she is the other me.

i love you and cannot love any other,

trying and trying, but the pain persists.

when a caged bird cannot fly freely,

it sheds its wings and falls dead.

when i cannot love you freely,

my heart turns cold and i live as if i am dead.

i wish it was not so, but it is,

and this heart does nothing, but cause more pain.

canini [o2/o2/o7]  11:42PM

 

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Tags: poemlovepainemo  Added 2007-02-02 23:41:14
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Very nice poem.

2008-05-13 13:04:48


cool poem

2007-02-20 15:40:55


very good. u worded it nicely and ur way of expressing each thought is admiring. *pop*

2007-02-03 00:35:54


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