ART + LIFE
My attempt at a Poem
I search for a reason, but there is none.
I search for an answer, where there are none.
Does my heart deserve this pain?
Aren't I worthy of a day free from sadness?
If the fates have conspired and determined that I'm not worthy of true true love,
then surely I deserve a night without sorrow?
I tell myself, "It's not your fault."
I tell myself, "You're not the betrayer, the liar, the deceiver."
I tell myself, "You're a good person who happily puts the needs of others first."
But I find no true comfort in these words.
I find no solice from the pain in my heart.
So I hope.
I hope against hope.
I believe in Tomorrow and all it's wonderous possibilities...
There is no safe haven from this pain.
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What can I tell you? You know i'm always here when you need me, but you should care for yourself as well.....
YUMI90
2007-03-17 22:00:11
That was pretty good. It appears you have the heart of mayrter(i can't spell).
CREN3856
2007-03-08 22:18:20
Ehh... why put the needs of others before yours? Why do they deserve that? Don't you deserve better? Don't you wanna be happy? What hope? What tomorrow? What pain? Of course there is no reason, and no answer. Life is meaningless. You should look at the bright side of things instead of focusing on the dark side. Try to be happy. Make yourself happy, others will follow. Being happy is contagious, so is being sad. So break out of sadness. It's not good for your health either. Plus, people who look at dark side of things don't produce enough endorphins, therefore they age faster. As long as you are confident, you should be safe. You shouldn't feel pain, you shouldn't hope, you shouldn't need to worry about others.
KID2KIDDO
2007-02-21 18:22:52