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Bloody Christmas

I look at his slit wrists

its sad to see him so mad on such a happy day

this bloody christmas morning

he reaches for the broken glass

to make more cuts,to bleed more blood

I slap him, begging him to stop

he swings his fist in an atempt to knock out my teeth

he misses and his knuckles make contact with the wall

he trys again this time his bloody knuckles hit my gut

on the floor , his wrist bleeds over  me

in my blood stained sundays best

he sighs and helps me up

a kiss on the cheek before I go

he wispers in my ear "Im sorry, merry christmas"

and with that Im out the door.

a bloody christmas can be the best kind


yeah I know its summer time but I feel like writing about the winter!!

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Added 2007-08-15 07:55:13
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you're a great writer!!! but now i'm even more thirsty

2008-08-10 00:25:58


you are a wonderful writer!

2007-12-21 10:45:12


Well winter is an awesome season.

2007-08-17 01:49:28


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