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Done

Looking at him now

As he lies face down on the ground

After so much

So much pushing till I went over the edge

So much I took

So much he pressed the imaginary buttons

I couldn’t or wouldn’t take it anymore

I tipped over the line

The buttons were shattered

Tipped to the end

When there was no escaping

Dumping him off the ravine

Hoping no one finds him

Well even if they do

It wouldn’t matter

All they’ll find is how pathetic he really was

How it would be easier without him here

Life peaceful for once

So give me an honor

A reward

Not a cell in the dark

I did you a favor

Not cause another problem like him!

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Tags: Done/poems  Added 2008-04-09 18:46:43
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I do like it, u know you are very talented I'm jealous ^_^

2008-04-11 07:20:04


This one is another that I had done last year, but it is denfitetly not about a boyfriend just so we have that clear. I do like it though. Hope you do too^_^

2008-04-09 18:48:45


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