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Mindslave Chapter 9 part I

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Mindslave Chapter 9 part I

She went aerial. The dredge had slammed Saru's body into the ground, and Mirana landed beside him. Remember what she does...she sent to him telepathically. She appraised her foes. The Master and Mindslave that had tracked them looked strong--the tiger's yellow eyes and fangs installed fear into whomever stared at them, and the female was dressed for the occasion, a black tanktop with loose black pants and combat boots. Oddly enough, the belt she wore had the word 'FOX' permanently engreaved into it. She'd have to help Darkfox to overcome seduction, her feet were already feeling heavy from pre-immobilization syndrome. Come to me! Her mind yelled at him; he looked up at her with deep golden brown human eyes, but didn't move. She dashed over to help him, but a sudden round-house kick had her airborne. At this, Saru felt a pang of anger. Though he let Mirana hit the ground, he smelled her blood coat the air. Fangs elongated his teeth, though his eyes remained stagnant. As Mirana recovered from the Master's kick (The Master had turned human again), he sensed the female lick her lips. He was rushing her before he thought about it; claws now coming from the four limbs he ran on. What was up with his eyes?

 

~Continued in Mindslave Chapter 9 part II


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The fox is brought to the ground and the foes are revealed to be a strong Master and Mindslave...the fear installed is unimaginable and how will Saru fight if he lacks kitsune vision? Keep reading!

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jokers right this need to be a manga

05.01.2008 09:48 AM


oooooooooooooooooooooo ah sweet!

03.14.2008 10:04 PM


pop

03.14.2008 05:12 AM


Ok gotcha

03.13.2008 01:47 PM


this is really gd ^^

03.13.2008 12:10 PM


this is really gd ^^

03.13.2008 12:10 PM


Hmm...gotta think, maybe ya can help me with character development...wait till spring break, I'll bring all my chapters of Mindslave up there.

03.13.2008 04:55 AM


Of course I do,So what is it.

03.12.2008 03:04 PM


Rainboweyes is helping me on that, we're working on character art/design right now--of course there's a spot in it for you if ya want.

03.12.2008 04:57 AM


Man when is this going to be turned to a manga lol

03.11.2008 01:38 PM


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