First time I have looked at something in script format and actually decided it was worth sticking around to see how it went. The way
Kushiro
reacts to the demon is an original, and it really emphasises how this is meant to be set in our world. (Possiable spoiler coming up!) I have a tendacy to read a little past the warning so I have put this in. I am going to predict that Miwa and
Kushiro
are going to get together, coz I haven’t read the rest of it. (Spoiler over). The use of the question marks is also a good idea, to denote a character that has not been introduced yet, to the reader. 5 out of 10. (and yes I know the ratings only go to 5, but just look at my article on how I review.)
awww man, reviews make me feel sick. no really, my stomach is actually failing on me now. note: This is not a burn, insult, or not angry in anyway, i'm just not use to critics. ;_;
AXESHIROKI found this not helpful
09.09.2007 10:21 PM