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The Final Dance

The final dance

You’re in a trance

Gazing in your eyes

The truth holds no lies

Hand in hand

Heart to heart

Loving each other

From the start.

Spin me around

Laugh out loud

Freeze the pose

Touch my nose

Kiss my lips

Look at me

Can’t you see

You’re in a trance

At the last dance

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 Added 2007-11-24 19:26:17
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yep i agree with darkfox1992.

SHINTARNO


2008-04-23 09:26:16


Cool, I love the rhythm. It's as if you are dancing when you read the poem.

DARKFOX1992


2007-11-24 19:48:31


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