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Only just a minute

I have only just a minute,


only sixty seconds in it,


Forced upon me, can’t refuse it;


didn’t seek it, didn’t choose it;


But it’s up to me to use it.


I must suffer if I lose it,


Give account if I abuse it.


It is only just a minute,


BUT ETERNiTY iS iN iT!

Poetry! Hope yew likey :3 And please comment and *POP* FENK YOOH!

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Tags: only,  just,  a,  minute  Added 2007-08-23 20:29:24
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I liked it very much. Good job! But what's with the capitalization of the last line?

CALAMARI


2007-09-04 22:07:46


Solid poetry, nice rhyming. *snorts*

GRINZOR


2007-09-01 23:42:56


It's pretty good! The words are not complicated, yet you still manage to capture a good image of this "minute". The only thing I would suggest is that you change the "must" in "I must suffer if I lose it" to a "will". But that's just a suggestion. Good job!

MXSKAI


2007-09-01 23:00:18


I like it- the words are very simple, but the thought behind them is profound. Well done!

AIRICHAN


2007-08-27 10:29:26


i like it good woke : )

ESONO


2007-08-25 09:22:17


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