plz comment lol so i know how i can make these fanfics better since i just started writing them a week ago :P

"Lorenzo!" Ash exclaimed happy to hear the voice of an old friend. " Ash!" said an old man's voice from the background " How goes things with you?" He asked expecting to hear a lot." I'm great!" Ash exclaimed clenching is fists in excitement." How about you?" he asked back." Whos that?" May asked Brock as she saw Ash talking to a man excitedly. "Oh he's an old friend we met in one of our adventures." Brock explained. "Oh i see." May said in amazement now watching Ash going. 'That's great!" " And yeah ill come!". " What wait?! were going to visit this old man?!" May thought in her mind a bit dissapointed by the choice of adventure. May could hear the boy flip the pokenav and face the group. " WE'RE GOING TO ALTOMARE!" He exclaimed. " When?" Max asked unsure wether to be happy or not. " in 2 days." Ash said blankly as he and  Pikachu started running down the path. " 2 Days?!' the rest of the group yelled as they ran for Ash.They seemed to have run for miles and Ash and Pikachu looked to excited to stop. " Huff Huff.." Brock and Max both said leaning against a tree." Geezs that kid can make the world record someday!" Brock exclaimed. " May unwanting to stop just told them quickly." Just stay here ill be back." In the forest 2 sets of eyes was watching the girl run..

Ash and Pikachu ran till they leached a tiny ledge looking over the ocean of route 127. " Wow look at that Pikachu!" Ash said to the little mouse. " Pika!" it said looking at the giant blue ocean. " We finally get to see them again huh?" Ash told the mouse rembering the 1st time they met Bianca, Lorenzo and of course Latias and Latios." Oh yeah!" he said remebering the gift she had given him before he left." Ashhh!" He heard a voice say in the distance "Huh?" he said turning around to see May running down the path out of breath. "Geezs you run too fast!" she said gasping for air. " Ha!" Ash said smiling " Maybe you should run a bit more!" he teased turning back to the ocean. The sea air was blowing gently and May could smell the sea salt within the waters. May stared at Ash as the wind blew through his hair. " He looks so.. Handsome." she thought blushing as she stared into his dark eyes. She stood up after getting her breath and stood beside him and Pikachu. " So Ash how are we gonna get there?" May asked. " We're gonna take a boat from lilycove." He said turning his head. " You excited?" he asked grinning.
"I'm always up for an adventure!" May said grinning back. They shared a few seconds of peace before it was broken by a abnoxious voice." Hello May her little boy friend." said a very familiar voice."No..anyone but him!" May screamed in her head. But it was in front of Ash and May was one of May's contest rivals Harley and he was with Drew!
" Drew, Harley what are you 2 doing here?!" May exclaimed facing the 2 boys that showed up. "Heard you're going to Altomare!" Harley said in a mock friendly tone." Yeah.." Ash said facing the 2 boys his cap over his eyes to not show his embarrasement at being called May's boyfriend. " Well me and Drew boy here plan to go there as well!" Harley said in fake glee." Why?!" May and Ash exclaimed together not wanting Drew and exspecially Harley to follow them. " Well i never!" Harley said in fake insult. " Well me and Drew boy here heard theres a pokemon contest there." Harley said knowing May would want them to come so she could beat them. " A pokemon contest!" May yelled fire burning into her eyes. " Well then you guys both have to come so i can pummel you guys again!" May yelled her face with anticpation. " Sure May!" Harley and Drew said as they waved there goodbyes and walked away. "Heh..Sucker!" Harley thought as they walked away.The only thoughts that came to Drews mind was "Ill make you fall in love with me May if its the last thing i do!"

Ash watched the 2 boys walk away and turned to face May. " Hey May do you think that was wise?" Ash asked her. " Of course Ash if theres a pokemon contest then i would want my rivals there so i can beat wouldnt i ?" May said turning to face the boy. " Well Uh i wanted to.." Ash couldnt finish the sentence before his face turned a shade of red." What Ash?" May asked her eyebrows raised."What did you want to do?" " N-Nothing!" Ash yelled as he grabbed Pikachu and ran back the way he came from." W-what? Wait!" May called out " Geezs i almost had him!" she told herself as she ran after him.

2 Days later in Lilycove..
( yeah i skipped what happenes but if u want me to write about it i will  as a filler ^^ when i have time of course)

"Ah!" Ash exclaimed stretching as the sea air brushed across his face. " Pikaaaa!' Pkachu said mocking its trainer." Come on guys!" the raven haired trainer yelled ushering to the Lilycove docks. " Lets go to Altomare!" he said as he jumped the dock fence and ran straight to the boat that would head to thier next destination. Ash ran with Pikachu up to the boat like a little kid but as soon as he got thier. He noticed 2 famailiar faces he didnt want to see. " Hi drew and harley." he said coldly handing the usher his ticket. " Hi.." they both said not giving him a 2nd glance. The rest of the group caught up and got on the boat. Ash stood at the end feeling a little down. "I was gonna ask May out when we got their.." he thought to himself. " Heh but i chickend out.." he yelled at himself. He got up and stood near the front with Pikachu next to him. May noticed this and was going to go up and ask him why Ash was so depressed but a hand stopped her it was Drew." May sit down and leave that loner alone." he said eyeing Ash coldly. She wanted to protest but her mind told her that " You have 2 boys in love with you sit the cuter one!" she was shocked at what she was saying to herself and wanted to protest but Drew stared at her with his green emerald eyes and she ended up sitting next to him with Harley eyeing them both closely.

Ash turned around shocked at what the sight he was seeing. He was about to tell Drew to back off but something made him stop. "May invited them.. Drew and Harley.." he thought deeply. " I told her i loved her and she told me she loved me.." he thought somemore thinking of past events. " But did she actually mean it?" he asked himself his heart slowly ripping.
" Heh maybe she doesn't love me at all.." Ash thought tears dwelling in his eyes. " Maybe she likes Drew instead and just used me to get him jealous." he conluded with tears rolling down his cheeks. Pikachu noticed his master crying and said worridly."Pika pika pika?" it asked hopping onto his masters shoulder. " N-No im fine buddy thanks." he said gratefully wiping a tear from his eye. "Pika." it said as it licked his cheek."I'm never gonna talk to May again!" he decided in his head as he clenched his fists.

In the distance a giant Meowth ballon was following the boat towards the city...

Authors notes: well i have to admit this one sucked lol its probably gonna be 3 parts and maybe the ending to the series i dont know for sure since i plan this one to have the most drama after all. Also i have others coming but there gonna take a while to make since my idea well is dry right now lol also the pics are not the best choice for this fic since most are all happy but eh i m sure you could get the mood of whats goign on with Ash lol anyway till next time XD o and p,s thank you to all my fans again im grateful that u are reading my fanfics XD