Alright here is my final draft of Brigid. Done on 28lb/45gsm newsprint, inked with micron 005 and 02 pens. The original looks alot better, my scanner didnt want to cooperate on this.
It's really good, i see lots of improvement. Her face is correct, the nose is slightly pointy but tats your style and maybe the eyes are a little high on the head, and her mouth is squareish but it's manga so it's grand but nothing major there. her hairs perfect well done, the neck is fine too, the body is a slightly muscley, which most women aren't. The only problems are her arms. Right there sorta muscley and make her look masculin, i'm sure you want her to be more feminin so just work on the body but otherwise ITS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!! WELL DONE!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D keep drawing!
also the backrouunds good too!
*laughs* I know. The scanners always give ya a hard time. Otherwise, that is so cool! You even did the background and everything! It just looks so perfect. How do you do it?
i like the background, i like the face, i like the body but i think the arms need a little more shape ( it kinda looks like she has fat arms) but its really good :) keep up the good work
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I really like it this is one of my favorite drawings of yours. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. One again nice job! *pop*
DRAMACONFAN14
2008-02-17 18:40:54
i use micron too!!!
KAYLYNROCKS
2007-12-22 07:55:46
It's really good, i see lots of improvement. Her face is correct, the nose is slightly pointy but tats your style and maybe the eyes are a little high on the head, and her mouth is squareish but it's manga so it's grand but nothing major there. her hairs perfect well done, the neck is fine too, the body is a slightly muscley, which most women aren't. The only problems are her arms. Right there sorta muscley and make her look masculin, i'm sure you want her to be more feminin so just work on the body but otherwise ITS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!! WELL DONE!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D keep drawing! also the backrouunds good too!
RUKIAKUCHIKIFOREVER
2007-11-16 10:18:36
*laughs* I know. The scanners always give ya a hard time. Otherwise, that is so cool! You even did the background and everything! It just looks so perfect. How do you do it?
BLACKROSE169
2007-11-15 19:49:48
i like the background, i like the face, i like the body but i think the arms need a little more shape ( it kinda looks like she has fat arms) but its really good :) keep up the good work
CHRISTYT
2007-11-14 18:15:30