Ive been brainstorming ideas for a manga and this is my first idea, Mathias. Probably will be my main character. This is my first attempt at drawing a character with a body, so feel free to knit pick. Done with a 6b pencil, kneaded eraser, micron 005, and 02 pens on 28lb 45gsm newsprint



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(left picture, the zoomed in one) : right his head is sorta like a cue ball maybe throw in a few tufts of hair there. his head is sorta squiarish but hes a guy so that's ok. his eyes are a little too far up on the head nut that may be your stlye so it's fine. his necks good, and good shading. the body looks sota bloated (no offence) and his sholders are a little too broad unless he plays sport so he's fine. his arm... yeah maybe work on those. but well done it's really good!!!!! (right picture : zoomed out) Ok i see it's a charater design but here's what i think. It's really good, but here are some things to work on. the head, again, see above. shoulders are maybe too broad? arms, they need work.. and hands are a little pudgy. boots are ok, maybe make them more 3dish so he's not floating in mid air. stomach, emm it's sorta looks bloated.. but it's fine. legs , i see you're going for the dragonball Z goku look, but they are maybe just a little too baggy, you don't want him looking like he's wearing parachute pants like mchammer.lol! the folds look grand. Yeh thats it, other then that its brilliant! Well done!
RUKIAKUCHIKIFOREVER
2007-11-16 10:28:41
0.0 Woah. Awesome. I could never make the feet look like they're touching the ground without putting them sideways. He looks like he's super muscular! Wherever there's muscle there's action. Where there's action, there's a good story. ^_^
BLACKROSE169
2007-11-15 19:47:34
i like the face but with those arms his chest needs to be a little bigger... everything else is good :)
CHRISTYT
2007-10-20 13:43:27