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GunBlades FD: The Duel 5

Vice in his new more demonic form set up quite evil intentions for the warriors. Out of nowhere, Peligra came and unleashed a barrage of wild punches, elbow jabs, and kicks towards Vice and knocked him out of the mansion and onto his bare back. Peligra teleported behind Kyle and leaned onto him.


Peligra: You alright my Gray Ripper, I wouldn't won't anything to happed to you.


Peligra started nibbling on Kyle's ear very gently and massaging him.


Kyle: Y-you sh-should focus o-on you-your oppenent Peligra instead of meeeee.


Peligra: Well he is starting to get back up, but if I win you gotta promise me alittle kiss.


Kyle looked nervous and unsteady while Stacey was laughing at him and everybody else looked confused.


Kyle: Why do so many girls in the Crave have to mess with me since I'm the Gray Ripper.


Right when Vice was about to get up Peligra super kicked him in his ribs propelling him to the air, but while in the air Vice started shooting out several shots of lasers at Peligra but she dodged them at an amazing speed. She teleported after Vice and unleashed a squad of furious kicks and punches that skyrocketed him down to the ground. Vice got back up and as soon as he got himself steady Peligra unleashed more barrages of attacks, grabbed him by his leg, swung him around violently and hit him across the ground and evrything she could, and finally launched him up in the air.


Peligra teleported above Vice and threw him on the ground with amazing power. She landed on top of him and moved the hair from off of her right eye to unveil a deadly attack.Peligra's eye was completely made out of blood and several designs made of living demonic, shadows. Vice looked into the eye and his rage began to soothe. Vice turned back to normal and fell asleep.


Kyle and everybody came outside and scattered out into the garden of the mansion to make sure everything was okay. Kyle stood over Vice and saw how peacefully he was sleeping while Peligra covered her eye up back with her hair.


Kyle: I've never seen a Shadow Master power like that, what is it?


Peligra teleported behind Kyle, wrapped her arms around him, and rested her head ontop of his.


Peligra: This a special eye technique that so powerful if you look into it you fall into a coma. It has several different abilities, like I could warp your mind into making you my slave. Oh, that sounds like a good idea.


Kyle: I prefer my mind the way it is and when will you stop trying to seduce me.


Peligra tried kissing Kyle, but he got extremely shy and tried brushing her off.


Kyle: Stacey help me.


Puppet Master: Stretto, I'm going to join whoever is the leader of this group in order to find out more about this Vice character.


Stretto: Wow your talking to me like I'm the leader.


Puppet Master: Who is the leader?


Stretto: He's a guy named Rage, he's busy right now though, but he'll be back.


Meanwhile, Rage woke up and stood up towards the dragon.


Astuto: To prove your worthyness you'll have to use your mastery of the Dark GunBlade to turn it into it's second form and strike me once with it.


Rage: Sounds simple, but I'm sure it'll be quite hard.


Astuto: Very wise boy.


Out of nowhere, hundreds of rocks came around the rock platform turning it into a huge circular rock battleground.


Rage: What's going on?


Astuto: While learning about the second form of the Dark GunBlade, you'll fight those who failed at pulling the Dark GunBlade from the rock. Also in this battle you can only use the Dark GunBlade, if you use anything else I shall kill you immediately.


Rage: Your so generous.


Dozens of once powerful and noble swordsman now demented and crazed were after Rage.


Rage: Finally, the story of my glory shall begin.


Rage charged towards the swordsman and tried cutting the one he was closest to in half, but his blade was so old it barely went into him.


Rage: darn it, might as well be give me a butter knife.


The swordsman tried ganging up on Rage and landed numerous attacks on him, but Rage luckily was able to gaurd and block most of the attacks. Dark Rage astoprojected himself out of Rage's body and began very enthusiastically talking to him while he was still locked in battle.


Dark Rage: Hey there buddy, looks like you need a little help, so let's work together for old time sake.


Rage: I don't know about that, you have the persistent habit of being deeply annoying and you tend to forget the task at hand.


Dark Rage: Well if you can't do that can you atleast turn me back into my true form, I was more glorified alter ego than this.


Rage was steadily struggling against the damned swordman, but he was somewhat able to told his own by luck.


Rage: Your true form is a mixture of all my demonic energy, alchemy, shadow form, and evil. If were not in perfect sync when I let you in your true form we could kill each other simultaneously.


Dark Rage: So, let's work together then.


Rage: You must really want your true form back, fine then let's do it.


Rage seperated himself from the men and let his body and the vincinty around him be devoured by giant living shadows, darkish-purple electrity, and a hazardous purple haze. Once the darkness cleared, the true form of Dark Rage stood. He still had the same goulish, pale white skin, black plates of armor all over his body, still the same pitch black eyes that had a certain coldness in them, and short silver hair that was light red on the bottom. Dark Rage and Rage beings were in total sync now but they still struggled greatly with the darn swordsmen.


Dark Rage: We need a more powerful weapon that can take them all out at once, more power to wipe out of everything.


The Dark GunBlade was overwhelmed by a gothic rainbow that transformed the blade into a more a powerful blade. The GunBlade was now a very large, vicious scimitar. It had a black sheif that had a decorative gold nylon lining with a black trigger next to the golden gaurd and a very long steel blade that was blood red at the curved edges of the blade.


Astuto: You've realized the meaning of the second form of the Dark GunBlade.


Dark Rage: What do you mean?


Astuto: The meaning of the second form of the blade is power, the power to annihalate any emeny that get's in your way. Devil's Rainbow.


Dark Rage: Then let's see what this thing could do.


Dark Rage pulled the trigger on Devil's Rainbow and it was engulfed by a rainbow like aura. Dark Rage charged for the swordsman and this time he had the upper time. Everytime one of the swordsmen tried attacking Dark Rage he made a beautiful counterattack and destroyed. Even though Rage was amazingly destroying the emenies dozens more and more kept coming.


Dark Rage: This is getting exausting, I need to destroy you all.


Astuto: Remeber the meaning of this form boy.


Dark Rage: More power.


Dark Rage pulled the trigger on the blade and it gleamed with a mystic rainbow aura.


Dark Rage: Devil Rainbow 7 Shine!!


Dark Rage at an amazingly electric quick speed swung his blade at the enemy and the aura came flying off of his blade and wiped out every swordsman there was.


Dark Rage: Who said rainbows weren't manly.


Astuto: You did good boy!


All of Astuto and his aura faded away and then a black scabbard appeared on the ground next to Dark Rage.


Dark Rage: We work well together.


Dark Rage turned back into Rage and he picked up the black scabbard from the ground and fancied it on his side.


Astuto's face appeared in the blade and showed what was going on with Kyle and the others.


Astuto: Your freinds are in danger, they have been fighting phantoms.


Rage: Phantoms?


Astuto: The silver beings, you see.


Rage: Do you know anything else about them?


Astuto: No, but your master does.


Rage tapped the GunBlade on the sheif and it turned back to it's normal form, then he sheith it. Astuto opened up a portal of darkness back to Daunte and the others, then Rage ventured through it.


Daunte: Well look who's back:


Lucy: Rage!


Derrick: Where you been at man, and what's with the sword?


Rage: I'll explain later, right now I'm going to elminate all these guys in one strike.


Rage took out the dark GunBlade with his left hand and turned it back into Devil's Rainbow, then he pulled the trigger on it and a rainbow aura consumed the blade.


Rage: Devil Rainbow 7 Shine!


Rage with all his might swung the rainbow aura off the blade, the rainbow aura expanded and it wiped out every phantom in the area.


Lucy: Aw, such a pretty and beautiful attack.


Daunte: Strange, but effective.


Derrick: Can someone explain to me how a f***ing rainbow can be an attack.


Daunte: Well, he's right, so how is a rainbow an attack Rage?


Rage: What rainbows can't be manly attacks?


Daunte & Derrick: HELL NO!


Lucy: Well I thought it was kool.


Derrick: Of course you would your a girl.


Lucy: What does that mean?!


Derrick and Lucy lunged themselves into an argument about the sexes and the things they can and can't do while Daunte started questioning Rage on the Dark GunBlade.


Daunte: Rage where did you get this sword from?


Rage: From a dragon named Astuto El Dragón Del Infierno, he had me pull this GunBlade from a rock.


Daunte: Why didn't you just break the rock like anyone else would.


Rage: That's what I said.


Daunte: If you got this from Astuto, then this must be the ledgendart Dark GunBlade.


Rage: You know about it?


Daunte: Only alittle, like this GunBlade has ten different forms and this was the only GunBlade invented by the greatest Blacksmiths of the Titans themselves.


Rage: Interesting, what time is it by the way?


Daunte: Right bout now it should be nearing midnight.


Rage: Lucy and Derrick stop your bickering now!


Lucy: He started!


Derrick: Did not!


Lucy: Did to!


Rage: Will you two stop already, we have to go before anymore of those phantoms show up?


Derrick and Lucy nodded in agreement and they followed after Rage like Lucipher and Daunte was doing.


Derrick: Rage where were headed man?


Rage: To a ship hold where the rest of my allies should be.


Lucy: Wow Rage you recruit people super fast!


Before long, Rage and the others got to the Ship Hold where they found Stacey and the others inside lumbering about. The warriors met up with each other and they all greeted and got acquainted with each other. Stacey and Kyle walked towards Rage and started badgering Rage on how they would fit so many people in one ship.


Stacey: Well Rage how are we gonna fit so many people and one ship, cause alot of people here are real weird like that Lucipher guy never said hey to any of us and just keep's a blank expression on his face.


Kyle: Sorry to sound weird Master Rage, but she's kinda right.


Rage: I really don't know.


Simon walked from out of the back and Peligra guided him to Rage and the others.


Simon: Woah, so your this nice girl freinds.


Stacey: Yeah why?


Simon: She saved me from those white things. If theirs anything I can do to repay you just ask.


Rage: Thanks, Simon I do something to ask you.


Simon: So sudden.


Rage: Yeah, is there any bigger ships around here that we can have?


Simon: Well, since you saved my life I'll let you have a secret ship of mine in the back.


Simon went into the back of the ship hold and everyone followed after him. There was a gigantic ship in the room about five times bigger than the one the Crave gave to Rage.


Rage: We can have this thing?


Simon: It's the least, I could do for you. Aw yeah, you could leave your other ship as long as you want here, I'll take good care of it.


Rage: Thanks, now everybody let's go!


Everyone rushed into the ship as quick as possible while Rage and Kyle slowly waltzed into it. The ship had enough rooms for everyone and was just like the Crave's ship accept bigger and much more space. Rage sat in the captain's seat of the ship while Kyle and Peligra started the ship.


Rage: Lift off.


The roof of the building flew off and the ship blasted off into space.


Kyle: So where are we headed to Master Rage?


Rage: Placidità.


Kyle: I see you think Master know something on those being we fought.


Rage: Exactly.


Peligra came over to Kyle and started flirting with him, but he tried brushing her off like always.


Peligra: You know Kyle, I got an idea for us to pass the time before we reach Placidità.


Derrick: How can a kid that young get a girl that looks that darn good.


Stacey: She's a rapist.


A few hours later the ship reached Placidità and the it landed in the lower level of the garden where there ship got a beautiful shine from the rising sun.


Rage: From here on out do absolutely everything I tell you everyone.


Rage left the ship and the warriors followed after him. They went upto the higher level of the garden where the Master was eying the ship.


Master: Rage, what is that ship doing here?


Rage and Kyle told Master about all of the events that took place between them.


Master: I see, I'll answer any and every question you have.


Kyle: What are those silver beings and where did they come from?


Master: Everything and everyone has magic inside of them and magic is like aliving thing and it reacts grows from the emotions we feel, so even though the body may die the emotions and magic doesn't. If the emotions were cheerful and happy ones it can become a spirit or stand still, but if their angry ones they can form into those silver creatures you saw called Phantoms. Since the Crave were one of the most powerful race's at the time the Phantoms were first discovered we created the Four Pillar Gate, a gate in which we used our alchemy to seal all those Phantoms inside.


Rage: So that's why they have those alchemic symbols on them.


Master: Anymore questions?


Rage: What's the purpose of the GunBlades?


Master: GunBlades were invented to eradicate the Phantoms, because if you use anything else besides a GunBlade you'll only temporarily vanquish the Phantom.


Stacey: How come?


Master: GunBlades were specially designed by Blacksmiths of an extreme caliber who used very ominous and mysterious methods to create the GunBlades.


Stacey: Are their any other types of Phantoms. Their are mainly eight types of phantoms. The basic common ones you saw and and the other seven are origanated from the seven deadly sins.


Rage: What do you mean?


Master: If you die with a deep emotion from one of the seven deadly sins you become one of the other more powerful seven types of Phantoms.


Rage: Damn, everyone were gonna stay here for the week and train.


Master: Wise idea, even though there are those basic eight types of Phantoms, there are also different ones from the very more powerful souls who rival even my strength.


Everyone split up through Placidità, browsed through the sights, and fought in some of the training arenas accept Kyle who stayed with Rage and Master.


Master: You two need to train the most, even though you have many skills you two haven't trained or had a real change in decades to centuries so your true skills are very rusty.


Rage: Yeah, ya right let's go Kyle.


Kyle: I won't fail.


Rage and Kyle took their distance from each other as they prepared armed and readied themselves for battle. Kyle kneeled his head in honor like always before battle and Rage did the same.


Rage: Let's go.


The two charged at each other. Kyle threw a couple knives at Rage, but Rage easily used some acrobatics to move out the way. Kyle held tightly his sword in his right hand and tried mutiple strikes at Rage who used his two handguns to defend himself. Rage took his distance from Kyle who was trying to end the battle close up. Rage charged his guns with a special alchemic touch.


Rage: Alchemic Blast!


Rage started shooting off numerous electric bullets at Kyle who could only dodge a handful of the bullets, but still kept charging towards to Rage. As soon as Kyle got within three feet of Rage he teleported.


Rage: Damn, I hate when he teleports this close his moves are to
unpredictable.


Kyle reappeared only a foot away from Rage with his blade consumed by wind. Kyle thrusted his blade to Rage's section and sent him crashing onto the ground while Kyle drew an alchemic symbol the ground and sent a powerful shockwave after him that blew him into the air.


Kyle: Gotch ya!


Rage: So you think.


Kyle appeared behind Rage and was going to use his blade to slit his kneck, but out of nowhere Rage unleashed a barrage of vehement kicks to Kyle's stomach and sent him painfully crashing to the ground. Rage landed on top of Kyle and started beating his head into the ground very rapidly, then used his alchemy to create an electric shockwave that forcively flung Kyle into the ship.


Kyle: So were gonna play like that, alright I got something for you.


The long awaited fifth chapter is here, have funn reading and please leave comments and suggestions!

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good job, i also felt like this chapter was kind of random in the transitions, but very good nonetheless, i can't wait to find out more about Vice.

2008-04-25 23:37:51


very good. kinda scattered, but your writing is definitly improving maybe when you're done with the series you could go back and make some spell and grammar checks.

2008-04-17 17:12:01


I bet the next chapters will not stop amaizing me. *pop* By the way, U miss-spelled the word 'everything'.

2008-04-17 00:07:31


these are really good. u should make a book

2008-04-16 15:28:48


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