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The Lost Sand Sibling part 2

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The Lost Sand Sibling part 2
  (Filler this what were we left off at.)

“I really hate being so paranoiac, you know that Jinx? But I hate not knowing what happen in past even more.” Katori says sighing and looking at Jinx; which was walking besides her and looking for something for them to eat other than her cats cat food. “Yeah; poor you But I swear you and Gaara need to get to know each other better, so that way you’re not so dang scared of him! And where are we going? And why are we looking for food, when I got cat food at home?” asked Jinx, as a piano fell, brushing Katori’s arm, and send a gust of wind that almost got her, but she dodged. Jumping on the other side of Jinx, she said “because I feel bad for your poor cat. And we kind of need good health if we’re going to check out that thing you were talking about in the middle of that village with the fight or something between what’s his face, and that other guy, right?” Katori looked around knowing something else was probably going to fall, considering Jinx was well Jinx. Her name defines what happens and about herself. Jinx looked at her with a; what the, face. And said, “Yeah right, right, so that’s why searching for food in the way depths of the forest eh?” she eyed Katori, as she looked a way pretending to have not see that face. “Well, yeah I figured that we might find some really good barriers or something, you know? Hehehe,” she forged some excuse to cover up the fact that she didn’t want to go into the village to look for scraps of food afraid they might run into Gaara and his team. Which than Jinx new what would happen, Tori Chan sees Gaara, next thing Jinx and Gaara know right where Katori was standing is a big dust ball, but Jinx insisted on going to village instead. And started walking off towards the village, and Katori followed behind her using her as a shield to hide her. They walked around for a few minutes than Jinx decided to go to the fighting building for ninjas, Katori decided not to go because she was going to wait for the tournament to start before she would go in, so that way she doesn’t have to wait long to see the matches. But something in her stomach told her other wise, that she wasn’t just going to only be watching like she had anticipated, but Jinx was going to pull that I’m putting us in this weather you like it or not thing on her again. (Remembering what happened the last time Jinx did that.)

 

            As Katori walked away with an “oh well” thought, while Jinx was already singing them up to fight. When the time came if it did Katori prepared her self to make it seem like she wasn’t a ninja, and she was going to purposely loose. Because she hates crowds, and being the center of attention, plus she not suppose to be a ninja, or else she might be discovered, considering some of her tactics are sand based. Not to mention she DID NOT want to come in contact with Garra or fight him, because she already knew what would happen. But as she was trying to shake off that feeling went into deep thought she didn’t notice where she was going. But next thing she knew she had looked up from staring at the ground while walking, and noticed that she wasn’t by Jinx or the coliseum building thingy. “Oh crap! I think I just got myself lost again by being in heavy thought,” Katori said in an almost mute whisper, letting out a soft sigh. Katori looked around and remembered where she was at in Leaf village. She was at one of their playgrounds that over looked the main parts of the village.

 

                She was enjoying the view and the sun that was beaming lightly on her peachy colored skin. When all of sudden she felt a shift in the wind that was quite abnormal, and rustling. She looked around and saw that no one was there. So she got up, and figured that it was just her scaring herself and her mind playing tricks on her again. Ignoring, and shaking off the feeling of someone being there or that she was being watched, figured that if she walked around she would feel much better. But just in case she was to get jumped like she did back home at the Sand village, she check to see that her body size “Dark Star”, also know as a ninja star was in place incase she had to use it for a last resort, defense. If her dodging skills suddenly decided to fail her, that was her second resource. She walked around the park sight seeing for a bit until she got board. Looking Katori saw a forest on the other side of the park.

 

                  I entered into forest just to walk around and shake off the weird feeling of someone or something watching me, probably a stocker of some sort, right? Nah, I thought there wouldn’t be that kind of people here at the leaf village, well at least not ones that would find interest in a low life girl like me, that’s got nothing of any value on her. Except the ninja star on her back, but it looks so fake and cheap like it would break instantly that I wouldn’t know who in the right mind would want to steal that from me. I continued to walk until I felt a presence that I should know really well by now; at least that’s how old it was. It was the presence I was around when I was small in the Sand village; well at least I think that’s where I’m from, according to Jinx anyways. It was…G-A-A-R-A!!!! It had to be him, because he was the only one that Jinx, and me knew that could control sand. My heart stopped and skipped a few beats, and I held my breath for a couple of seconds. Than I let it in a soft sigh. “Ok Tori Chan, get a hold of your self, GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!” I thought to myself while praying under my breath that it wasn’t him or if so than Jinx would come and ruin this moment of encountering each other with good yet bad luck.

    (Hope you guys like this part too, it's not too confusing is it? Sorry if it is, I'm probably going to redo it after I'm done editing so it'll be a bit better.^^)

 


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Continuation from the first part of the story.

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This is really good, i especially enjoy the way you describe everything you are writing. Keep it up and check out my fictions sometime :] oh and...its just a little bit confusing but i understand the main concept.

10.30.2007 01:02 PM


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