Hello darling,

First, I'd like to point out that there is a missing page that distracts from your manga. It messes with the storyline thereby meaning I was unable to read most of it.

As to your panels, I think you should try angles or fading panels into one another. Don't be afraid of spicing things up, I'm sure once you try expieriementing you'll find you really love it. Right now the horizontal theme tends to get a bit boring and repetative, leaving more to be desired.

Your monsters development is spectacluar and eye catching, but I fear that your readers are disappointed in the end when they begin reading it, because your characters pale in comparrison. If you devote a little more time to them, I'm sure they will turn out just as well as the monsters eventually. However the dialogue between the characters seems a bit stiff and disengaged, as if they were speaking words rather then having a conversation. This also will be fixed when you work on your story line. I'd like to see you try writing a story line that isn't a twist off of someone elses work.  While yes, twists are fun and interesting, it's not very unique and that's what creating is all about. Creating somet hing that no one else has thought of yet.

I hope this review was helpful to you and any readers.

Eternally,

Kiia Jade Emora