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PART NINE:One More Daring Dream

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PART NINE:One More Daring Dream
" Aahh!! Aaahhh!! More!! More!! Deeper!! Aaahh...Rafael....I can't..hold..."
And I came. Wrapped tightly around Rafael. We both came at the same time. We fellt to the bed. He caressed my face and kissed me. " I'm going to miss you a lot, Lucas."
I grabbed his hand. " Don't say that! Don't remind me that you are gone tomorrow."
He smiled to me and took me in his arms. " I'm only gone for a moment. You hardly notice I've left."
" That's not true. I will miss you the moment I don't see you. Every time I leave your room I want to go straight back."
He had really changed me. I fellt like I was whole new person. I had found someone to care, to love. And he loved me back. It was something that I hadn't ever experienced before. And I was hooked to this happy feeling.
If only our last night together would never end...

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I grabbed my sword from the floor. Even if this would be the last thing I'd ever do, I would kill the man who had taken my reason to live away from me. Left hand wasn't my best sword hand but a good soldier can fight with both hands if necessary.
He was good. Saber is a difficult weapon to use but to him it seemed like a child's play. He didn't talk at all, even when I tried to insolt him. Why was  this 'Caleb' acting so mysteriously?
The longer it took, the more painfull it was to my arm. But I needed to continue, no matter what. I changed my tactic to more aggressive and cornered him against the wall. " You...you disguist me!!" I shouted. " Killing people for money!! That is the lowest job!! Go to Hell!!" I locked his arms and pulled out my dagger. " See you soon, because I'll bet I'll end up in same place soon enaugh. We can continue our battle over there."
And I stabbed him. Even then he didn't say anything. Just collapsed to the floor and bleeded all over the place. I lowed down and took off his stupid mask. But I was shocked! Under the mask...There was definetly a woman!!
" Holy poop!! Who are you?"

But she was dead. I wondered did the Emperor knew that 'Caleb' was a woman? " Well, let's go and ask him." I said out loud and marched to His Majesty's personal rooms. The things I was going to do would be considered as a treason, but I could not care less. I needed to revenge Rafael's death. That was all I could think of.

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trying to finish this thing ^^'' hope you guys have liked this and i hope my english has been good enaugh to understand...

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my...my...How Sad...(crying)...

05.28.2008 09:19 AM


... ^-^

10.19.2007 03:33 PM


yeah you rock same with your english keep itup

10.19.2007 02:42 PM


NOOOOOOOO....Ra-rafael....T_T *sniff*

10.19.2007 02:14 PM


Rafael d-died.......>< NO!

10.19.2007 01:20 PM


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