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It was a dark, stormy, and gloomy day on Friday 13th. The 9th graders were
taking a field trip to a historic mansion. Mr. V's class piled on one of the buses and
drove off. They got there beforeanyone else, so they decided to go inside. It suddenly
became black, lighting, and no electricity. So they're stuck in a manision with no
electricity, no way of knowing when the other buses of kids come or if they could get
Mr. V's kids outside the house. Then they heard sounds of banging. Then a blood
curdling scream came out of the basement. The lights came back on. All the kids
knew the house got one of them and they knew exactlly who it was. It was Katie! They
wanted to leave, but Mr. V said that they had to at least go get Katie or maybe even her
remains! 20 minutes later, Mr. V had lost 4 kids, including Katie and now he was so
close he could feel it or maybethat was just what he was stepping on that gave him a
clue. All of a sudden, the light came on, the door opened, and the missing children
were found. It all felt like a dream some how. Even the other buses of kids were there.
It was still daylight, and it looked like it was still only 12:30. Everyone of the people in
the class from Mr. V to Katie(31 people) had no clue what just happened.
kool kyo
the first ending to this story made especially for Halloween!!!!