Cute and unique :D But, It would be nice for shadings or more details on the hair. [I don't know.] but..KAWAII!!! Love the eyes.

SHADOWYIN

08.19.2007 01:18 AM

hmmm good practice but u should work on more detail such as shading, like, under the hair, or beside the face.....but i like yur eyes!! they are pretty and the mouth ans blushing is godd cause its even

DEMONKITTEN7

08.10.2007 06:55 PM

*nod* u have a unique style, thou, i can tell u that. u also need to wrok on ur head shape and the blush should be more spread out, and the eyes should be further apart. when u do eyes like that, u usually want the sparkle bigger, u know, finish the edges rather then cut them off just to fit inside the eye. ur neck possitioning is good, though, and its clear that u have a sence of syemtry, rather i cant get my eyes even like that.........^^;; but, otherwise, its actully kinda cute. *pop* keep up!

GINKAZERYUU

07.22.2007 01:14 PM

well i can say you did a great job so far, just personally, i think it needs some more work though. If it wasnt for a few very specific key DETAIL's like the eye's, the little blushing, and the hair, i wouldnt have been able to figure out this is a female character, if its not, just uhh.. wow? *P0P* Nice job, but still you need to work more on your design, though i can tell you this, im never gonna be this good at drawing manga fooor a long time, unless im using photo shop or something. I give it a 3 out of 5.

SUPERNET2

07.22.2007 02:09 AM