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Why do you hurt me?

Why do you hurt me?

I try to be nice,

and I try not to waste,

when we're here or there.

It feels great,

when you take me

to those shows.

And it feels even more greater ,

when I win a trophy,

for me and especially for you.

When I first started winning,

you took care of me,

like an everlasting toy.

Because I was always there for you.

Colors of fixing everywhere,

and cruisings at 10 M.PH.

Watching you whistle,

at them other girls,

made me kinda jealous.

But I knew you loved me,

because I loved you too.

But ever since she came along,

you've stopped the care for me,

Like though,

I had never existed before.


I wrote this a long time ago. When I saw my first Lowrider show. My original has a lowrider truck with a girls face in tears traced in the background of my poem.

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its really good and deep

2007-10-25 19:25:08


thats deep!!

2007-10-11 13:17:27


wow this is relllli good!!!

2007-10-11 03:49:31


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