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Twilight freedom

 

Twilight Freedom

Twilight answered her aching call

as she lay on the grass,

The blood haloed around the girl in a sign of regret,

Her wide, shocked eyes soon turned content

at the angels surrounding her,

awaiting her death

As pain ripped her body

at the aftershock that had been disposed upon her

the shaking breathes and

rapidly slowing heart

allowed her no rest,

Her mother sung her warm-hearted call

as the girl tried too,

The quivering lips were dripped in a

hint of blood the she knew

The angel that was an exact mirror of herself

floated above her

With fluttering white wings

And a long, white dress that adored her shoulders

Tears of joy streamed down her face

with rivers of life she had once known

Saying goodbye to the life of old,

Ignoring the cold of her hands,

She reached up for her loving mother

asking the lord for forgiveness,

For this to be over,

As her soul lifted out of her body

a wide smile lit her face,

The pain was no more,

She was at peace,

Her own wings danced upon the air

as her white tunic slide over her shoulder

Her body lay on the ground lifeless and colder,

She floated down,

Touched the crown of her dead body’s head

Slid down and closed her eyes,

Looked into the skies

and sung with her mother up to the clouds

Where the rest of the smiling angels floated ahead.


Freedom comes in many ways....

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idk...what?

2008-04-16 18:44:18


WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WRITE ON FICTION AND ARTICLES?

2008-04-15 18:03:41


thanx! ^ ^

2008-04-07 17:43:38


Good poem, as for me I suck at writing.

2008-04-06 16:39:13


thanx!I love your vids!

2008-03-24 15:59:41


that was good/sad in so many ways keep doing good. this poem is awesome

2008-03-24 15:29:43


thank you!

2008-03-17 14:43:05


its sweet and true ^_^


2008-02-08 11:20:37


thank you ayugirl!

2008-01-30 11:44:43


missct i love this poem!!!

2008-01-30 10:34:26


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