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Broken and Suicidal

As night revolved

and sprits prowled,

the dark  inky night,

the children shivered,

the parents quivered,

at the site of the untimly girl's death,

her vancant eyes

and matted hair,

sent the signals of despair,

with her gashed arms

but pale gray skin,

they knew she would never win,

her heart shattered,

spirit broken,

at the news of here best friend's death,

how could she live with the tought that,

she couldn't help her when she was death itself?


Just a poem from a random bout of inspiration.

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Tags: littlemissct,brokenandsuicidal  Added 2008-03-30 02:26:45
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geez make me feel better.

2008-05-05 12:19:18


ToT so sad...oh sa very sadToT

2008-05-02 15:10:10


thank u!

2008-04-19 18:29:31


awesum poem

2008-04-19 07:29:56


thank u very much! ^^

2008-04-16 04:16:51


that is a awesome poem ^^

2008-04-15 19:12:28


not that bad is it?!

2008-04-15 14:47:24


so sad T-T

2008-04-14 16:16:39


thanx.lol.

2008-04-06 00:59:18


Woah... Thats 2 awesome 4 words...

2008-04-05 23:27:54


thanx.

2008-03-30 11:03:48


It's so sad and depressing. :(

2008-03-30 09:45:51


thanx....

2008-03-30 02:50:02


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2008-03-30 02:39:16


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