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Forgive

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ADDED: 08.28.2007

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Forgive

Forgive the sun who didn't shine.The sky had asked her in to dine.Forgive the stars that heard your wish.The moon prepared thier favorite dish.Forgive the rain for it's attack.The clouds have tears they can't hold back.Don't hate the birds'cause they are free. Don't envy all the things they see.Don't block the wind ,but hear it's cry.Or else that wind may pass you by.Forgive the storm it means no harm.Could not resist to show it's charm.Forgive the Earth that never turns. Don't hate the sun ,because too much burns.Life intends to to not cause pain. The flowers bloom from all the rain.The storm will come and it will pass.The sun that shines,it grows the grass.The wind it cannot help but cry.The stars at night light up the sky.Forgive the world in which we live.We'll all find peace if we forgive.

 


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I like it. ^_^

06.23.2008 11:49 PM


3 words. I Love It.

04.25.2008 08:36 AM


thats really cool ^^

04.23.2008 06:58 PM


This is amazing! I love it! ^_^

04.08.2008 04:02 PM


this is the best poam i have seen yet .......

03.28.2008 03:49 PM


deep...............i wish i could be forgave

03.12.2008 03:14 PM


wow its prity good

03.11.2008 05:57 PM


......................your good *pop*

02.12.2008 06:07 AM


thats deep.....wow i love this poem

01.02.2008 03:35 PM


wow awsome job!

11.19.2007 03:17 PM


Very good again, wow the words flow so beautifully and lyrically almost.

09.14.2007 05:38 PM


wow, thats deep. but so true. why cant we all forgive?

08.28.2007 12:56 PM


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