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Elements Unbound epi 1

A cloaked figure of a woman ran quickly down the dark paths of the Mishimo Forest. Dark times have arrived and she was being rundowned by an Assassin sent by the Dark Sorcerer. With every hasted step she grew weaker. The reason why the woman was being chased was because she had something in her that the Dark ones wanted. She had the Heart of the Elements.

"Please, Mistress of Earth, protect this Heart for I have failed in my duty," she breathed quietly. Turning quickly she was able to have enough time to avoid the Assassin.

On his horse, the Assassin passed by the dense part of trees the woman hid behind, giving the woman time to release and send her Heart away.

'Oh Mistress of Earth. Here my plea and send this Heart to the One who is able to protect it better than I. I beg of you!' she whispered in fear.

Her cry was answered as a soft beam of light from the Heavens shown down on the woman. The light brought the gentle winds and lifted the cloak from the figure and revealed her face. She was a beautiful maiden who came from the Mishimo Village. Her long, glowing black hair flowed behind her. Her cherry colored lips showed vivid from her creamed colored skin. Bright blue eyes looked up to the Heavens for the relief of the Gift she's been given.

The Mistress of the Heavens lifted the Heart of the Elements from within the maiden's heart and was broken into six equal pieces. The pieces flew into the air and was sent else where.

Seeing the beam of light, the Assassin turned his horse around and quickly went to find the maiden. Lifted of the Heart, the maiden fell into a deep sleep, breathing the words, 'Thank you...'

The Assassin had found the maiden, unrevealed and stopped his horse.

'I have found you.' He whispered in a low voice and he rode away, with the maiden still in a deep sleep.


it's about these modern kids who come together, unfamiliar with each other, and they are given special pieces of Hearts to save the other realm of Sonoto either by Daydreaming or by Dreaming.

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cool. very interesting!

2008-04-18 08:24:02


Very intising story you've made here, I loved the deatail you potrayed in the scenary. Very lovely ^_^

2007-02-15 08:09:34


I LOVE THIS STORRRRRRRRRY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD ^_^

2006-10-13 08:57:44


wow! this is good, nice detail.

2006-09-01 19:44:45


That was nice. Hope you keep going.

2006-08-19 23:36:34


i like it keep going keep going keep going.......

2006-08-18 09:55:30


Really good. Can't wait till chapter 2.

2006-08-16 22:24:10


its reallly good is there going to be a chapt. 2????? ^.^

2006-08-16 17:28:42


Awesome story "POP"

2006-08-16 13:37:15


Cool!

2006-08-16 13:25:55


This story rules!! My story is short and sucks!!! (Crying)!!!

2006-08-16 13:24:25


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