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Bitter sweet chapter 1

Hello my name is Cossette I have long wavy black hair bright blue eyes [[ya that natural]] and super white skin. I tend to wear all black that doesn’t help my case. Im what they call the black sheep in the family. I think my parents are ashamed I don’t play any sports and I can barley manage a good G.P.A, and not a good social life. But I like it that way , I only have on good friend her name is Stacy we have been friends since pre-k but she moved and left me all alone. The only thing that motivates me to go to school is art class, I can express my feelings on paper and I found I have some actual talent at something. At night I like to go outside and sit under the large willow tree in the park down the street from my house. It is were I get my inspiration at because its so peaceful. Now I know what you are thinking ok she wants to go outside at night when there are predators and perverts but here in Starshollow its al little town where everyone knows everybody and nothing bad or out of the normal happens here. Tonight was different I went on my usual night stroll to the park when I got the sudden feeling that I was being watched the hair on the back of my neck stood up. I thought ok Cossette your just being paranoid, but even so I started to walk a little faster. Then I got a sudden creepy sensation so my casual fast walking to into a full blow run. When I reached the park the feeling went away I started to laugh at myself because of how I freaked myself out. About 5 minutes later u had finished setting up my drawing utensils. When I heard a loud piercing scream. I felt as if my ear drums were bleeding. My vision became blurred. Through what I could se something was coming toward me I wanted to scream but is was like my throat was closing. I tried gasping for air my knees became weak and my body became heavy. Everything began to fade as I started to fall.


hiya ummm if you like it than please pop i u don't then umm u don't lol

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Tags: bittersweetfiction  Added 2008-05-13 17:53:08
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You should read my book! It's on there listed as Animal Instinct.

2008-06-10 17:25:23


That was great I can't wait to read the next one!

2008-05-21 22:58:29


sweet^^

2008-05-17 19:17:16


u have a talent i can only write good hentai stories...lol

2008-05-17 08:53:16


Of course i will here *POP*

2008-05-16 23:53:27


Thats awsome keep writing your great *pop*

2008-05-16 04:00:26


nice probably your old friend tried to kill you or got killed in front of your eyes

2008-05-15 14:00:27


one word. AMAZING!

2008-05-15 09:05:59


thnx 4 posting

2008-05-15 08:55:57


2 words: write more

2008-05-14 15:01:22


its cool, but it would be easier to read if you spaced it out in paragraphs. but its really cool, u should keep at it

2008-05-14 10:20:16


Well it is nice but maybe you should continue it.

2008-05-14 07:01:16


write more lets c where this goes >.

2008-05-14 06:30:34


hey thats good i like it^^

2008-05-13 20:16:39


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