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Poem-Cold

I long for you

i need you

but i can never have you

you have become so distance

why do i feel this way

i can not explain it

your tearing my heart

can't you see

i see my blood all over your hands

does it make you feel more like a man

i hear your whispers

in my ear

please don't leave me all alone

i feel it growing colder

time is running out now

cant you hear my pleas

for you to be with me

 

 


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Tags: lovepoem  Added 2008-05-18 17:21:25
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so sad but i liked it

2008-06-18 11:24:01


so sad....but i like it!

2008-05-23 15:33:37


it flow with beauty

2008-05-23 07:38:43


Beautiful *pop*

2008-05-22 04:24:13


cool and dark and beautiful.

2008-05-21 02:41:09


Its beautiful.

2008-05-20 16:06:51


T_T*POP*

2008-05-20 13:06:54


Wow, I like it!

2008-05-20 03:00:08


wow thats deep

2008-05-19 14:44:38


it's nice brings a tear down my cheek, just kidding, but why wait and cry when you can just leave him behind then he will be the one crying for what he has done

2008-05-19 13:48:57


POP! =D

2008-05-19 08:48:43


Weep *pop*

2008-05-19 06:51:21


awesome

2008-05-19 06:06:47


*pop*

2008-05-19 05:56:32


Nice peom

2008-05-19 03:12:53


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cybermuffin
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Cold

Very nicely done
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