ART + LIFE
Deeper than Deep
Holding on tight
the earth startes to shake
and my heart startes to quake
the sky begins to dim
my world begins to spin
consantly being blinded
to the truth held within
how can i forgive these demons inside
im running around but theres no where to hide
my heart grows cold
and i start to weep
for the love which i can not keep
standing alone
for i am full grown
thanks for eading if you like pops are nice
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Nice Ryhme scheme
CONDESCENDING
2008-05-27 07:18:34
i love poetry and you look like a good poet!
DAYNATOMODASHI
2008-05-23 15:30:10
Its very good and I have been around long enough to see a lot of poems..your was very good.*pop*
PAINFULPLEASURES
2008-05-23 10:55:10
Wow, this is really deep and profound. *pop*
BLACKMAGE16
2008-05-22 04:22:21
.............awsome
PINNERO1
2008-05-20 21:13:12
did u write this it f***in rocks motherf***er excuse my language *pop*
2008-05-20 19:41:30
This is Awsome & very deep *pop*
ANBULEADERSHIPPUDEN
2008-05-20 15:19:33
then pop it is. realy good stuff.
DEMONLOVE
2008-05-20 12:14:47
thts deep
SALEMNATION
2008-05-20 09:11:48
It's very calm and I love rimes!!! *pop*
KITTY14
2008-05-19 20:17:22
NICE *POP*
ANIMEGIRL07
2008-05-19 14:16:13
NICE *POP*
ANIMEGIRL07
2008-05-19 14:14:44
very nice, it's as if you are about to die for the one you love has just left you
JAKUB
2008-05-19 13:51:15
nice n cool "pop"
DAXTER5
2008-05-19 07:57:04
Very deep *pop*
MANGAMANIACNAT
2008-05-19 06:52:43