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The first Snow Fall

The first snow fall
Everything becomes clear
Just for that second
Seeing such natural beauty
Like diamond falling from the sky
Such a cold sensation
Falling everywhere
Slowly drifting down to earth
With not a care
The wind blows
And they dance
When its done
Everything becomes so lifeless
And quiet
But when its over
New life blossoms
Bringing color to the world


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Tags: snowfallpoem  Added 2008-06-25 21:01:48
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nice job what made you want to make this????

2008-07-12 11:28:32


sooo pretty. good job!

2008-07-08 19:56:00


beauty and ice wonderful combo.

2008-07-06 17:57:42


such compassion and detail it is beautiful and hits me right in the heart

2008-07-05 17:41:08


very nice

2008-07-03 06:54:23


cool

2008-06-30 13:55:18


Haaaa.... a memoirs to me...

2008-06-29 20:53:23


no wonder it's so darn chilly

2008-06-29 13:51:11


super awesome!

2008-06-28 11:54:33


pretty

2008-06-26 10:21:45


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