Familar faces all around me
Same old faces worn out and sad
Going nowhere drowning in sorrow
From dreams they never had
Tears filling uo there faces
running in circles
finding it hard to take
just look right through me
It really is good! I can tell a true artist wrote this!!!=:>
AYUMIGRL1
2008-10-07 13:00:59
it's a true work of art
LOVELESSKID
2008-08-13 16:00:45
Picture makes the poem even more easier to imagine..great work!!
SHIGURELOVE13
2008-08-13 11:08:17
i dunno i still think it's very cool,
CYBERMUFFIN
2008-08-12 08:13:03
needs more work but not bad
RIKKULOVER999
2008-08-09 14:01:40
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It really is good! I can tell a true artist wrote this!!!=:>
AYUMIGRL1
2008-10-07 13:00:59
it's a true work of art
LOVELESSKID
2008-08-13 16:00:45
Picture makes the poem even more easier to imagine..great work!!
SHIGURELOVE13
2008-08-13 11:08:17
i dunno i still think it's very cool,
CYBERMUFFIN
2008-08-12 08:13:03
needs more work but not bad
RIKKULOVER999
2008-08-09 14:01:40