Very nice, well put together. just an awesome story, keep writing you have the talent

KIBAINUZUKA

12:26 AM, 02.17.2008

That was great...I will like to read chapter 2 This cold be a good manga you know :)

PIKACHU15690

02:25 PM, 02.08.2008

Dude that was awsome

JASE1585

07:33 AM, 01.29.2008

Wow that was very good. You could really get involved with this. I like stories like that.

LOSTIE

01:49 PM, 01.14.2008

wow!! i really liked that!! im gonna read chapter two now!!

SONIC

10:38 AM, 01.14.2008

So he went back inside his body?! Does that mean he's alive now?

FRUBAGURL88

06:29 PM, 01.08.2008

thats [retty cool yet scary!..:)

LLOUVAKATES

10:50 PM, 01.02.2008

i mean awsome

KODOCHAPRINCESS

07:14 PM, 12.30.2007

awsomwty for the tip

KODOCHAPRINCESS

07:14 PM, 12.30.2007

wow. good start.

YUKIROH4LIFE

05:06 PM, 12.30.2007

this is the 1st time I really read your fic. This is good but I'm just wondering if there is something more to it. Next time, put a cliffhanger.

PAPLOU

07:37 PM, 12.23.2007

interesting!!

LUNAFLOWER14

06:47 PM, 12.22.2007

that was very impressive love your way of words

04:56 PM, 12.18.2007

cool i like it.

VAMPIRE23

02:32 AM, 12.15.2007

I REALLY LIKE IT IT WAS A GOOD PIECE I WOULD LIVE TO READ MORE I LIKE HOW IT DARK LIKE ^_^ LOL I RATE IT A 8 1/2

BADASQUEEN13

03:34 PM, 12.14.2007