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ADDED: 08.11.2007
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Darkness surroundedme, except for the light of the blood-red moon.Something tickled my feet. Ilooked down to see crimson rose petals. Suddenly, the floral scent strangled me. I struggeld to move, to breathe,to escape. I was alone in the wilderness. Then I saw her.
She stood on a distant hillside, her silhouette outlined by the eerte moonlight.I moved toward her, but my body felt sluggish, weighted down. Still, I dragged my feet forward, step by step, inch by inch. Ihad to talk to her.
I drew closer. I could see her hair swaying in the wind. She stood with her back to me. Slowly,her details were revealed in the crimson moonlight. She wore an evening dress made of slik, but it was tattered and torn. Her arms and legs covered with wounds.Even so, was still really beauitful.
I finally stood close enough to touch her. Iextended my hand to tap her shoulder, but as I did, a sudden gust of wind scattered a tornado of rose petals throught the air. She slowiy turned toward me. Blood-streaked tears ran down her face.
I tried to speak,to scream,but no sound escaped my throat as I found myself staring at my own frightening mirror image......
wow, a little confusing but good ^^, sorry i'm a little tired ^^
That... was...so...Beautiful!!!!!!
wow are you a poet or something thats really good. i'm speechless.......you have some real talent. oh and just to make sure you are a guy right??? sorry just had to ask.
wow thats deep...emoish but deep...wow it brought a tear to my eye..you ARE a guy right?!
*tears up* very good job ivan, very good! *pop*
that's awesome.how do u think of stuff like that? it's good.
dang ,man thasts good u get a pop
whoa man thats deep, it has such rare emotion!!!! i luved it
wow thats deeep*pop*
shattering soul in mindless darkness an image of intoxicating beauty that crys blood without a sound but pain is all around....am i right?=^_^= very beautiful
wow.....it's amazing
That is a Beautiful Poem *pop*
Wow.......Kool
this is hot
wow so pretty!!
MUENO
10.18.2007 01:31 PM