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Tears

The tears fall so freely

Mixing with the rain as it drops

There's no sadness

Just a feeling of numbness

And the cool rain

Against your skin.

 

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Tags: poetry  Added 2006-11-21 17:00:39
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this is making me way to sad.

2006-12-28 14:31:33


nice!!!!

2006-12-27 20:39:28


I like it. Simple and very powerful at the same time.

2006-12-11 13:23:17


that touches me in ways that i can not say. LOL just kidding but thats pretty deep.

2006-11-29 21:55:34


no, they just let me sleep. but i was really hungry when i fell asleep, so i was really really hungry when i woke up. idk y they didnt wake me up. oh yeah! i just remembered we still have a whole apple pie in the fridge! thats gonna taste good.

2006-11-25 15:06:54


yeah, you too. last year i kinda missed thanksgiving last year cause i fell asleep in my room and when i woke up, they were already putting the food away. lawl. oh well

2006-11-24 05:54:17


the rain swept you away, with the current, your gone, into the sea of lonelyness, that will soon engolf us all, but for now, lett's just soak up the sun, and love this beautiful moment in time, for it all will soon be gone......*bow* (thanxs for tolerating my lameness!)

2006-11-21 17:27:56


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