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heros...Ch 1

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heros...Ch 1
Ano what are we gona do you cant disarm a bomb. It doesn’t matter I picked this bomb up its my problem now...and to think I could still be sleeping right now.

30 minuets earlier

Ano hay wake up! Uhhh… what is it sis. What is it you promised you would take me to the mall today. I looked at her and said “no” and throw her out. She began to bang on the door and then. Whaa Ano your so mean Whaa. Jeez… all right ill take you. Yhay it wont
Take long ether I know just what I want to get.

29 minuets later

What do you think this one or this one. Ano Ano Ano! Jeez will you be quiet you said you know what you wanted so pick one. Hay do you hear that my sister said and then it happened. Yeah I do its an like a light screeching sound its coming from underneath these skirts. There sat a black box with a digital display and a timer running down from 34:51.

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kool, may i suggest something? put your dialoge in "quotes" so it'll be easier to read. other than that it's really suspensefull

05.18.2007 03:37 PM


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