Im hungry, said Jewl. "Can we get somthing to eat". "Damn! girl you alway begging for food, and to be so skinny. I tell you one thing you do know how to eat", Said Ron. "Shutup you Bastard", Jewl Screamed. (Hi my name is Jewl, I stand about 5'6, I have red hair, wear black tanktop shirt, and black jeans. The guy ont he side of me is Ron, he's about 5'7 blond hair, he wear a stripy shirt and kaky pants). Jewl look over there is'nt that the guy is our second period class, you know the one that never shows up, said Ron. Jewl look over at the guy. Omg! it is him he's sooo cute, his name is Randy, I sooo have a crush on him, Said Jewl blushing.( Randy is 6'4, brown skin, wears black t-shirt, and black jean loose pants). "He's not that great" said Ron outta of jealousy. Let's go over and say hi, scream Jewl grabbing Ron hand runing. Ummmmm! Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! Randy Is me Jewl from you 2nd block class. Randy glare at her. What do you want, said Randy in a cold voice. Just wanted to say hi that all, said Jewl cheery. Randy glare at Ron. Umm I came alone with her, said Ron in a scary voice. Well hi, now by said Randy. Randy begins to walk off , soon after a guy come and, put a gun to Jewl head. Give me all your money b****!!!. Jewl Ill save you, screamed Ron. Ron runs over and tryed to stop the guy, the guy pistol wipe Ron, and knocks him on conscious. Jewl screams in terror. Like I said give me all your money b****, said the Robber. The robber hears footsteps. Huh! said the robber looking up. Randy walks over ther by him. You must like picking on innocent girl don't you, said randy in a calm voice. Hell f***ing yeah i do, now what the f*** your going to do about it, screamed the robber. Randy smirks. Im going to kill you, said randy in a cold voice. The guy take the gun and aim at Randy. Oh! your going to shoot me, said Randy with a smile on his face. Dieeeeeeeeee! screamed the guy. Before the guy shoot Randy jabs a knife in his throat. Another guy come from behind and trys to cut randy but a mysterious girl stabs hin in the back of the head. Rand turns around and glare at her for saving his life. Who da hell are you, said Randy. My name is Tonie, but sorry moi got to go. the mysterious girl runs off............ to be contiued
A story about romance, love, and lust! epic battle, a story you would never forget
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nice.. a new story ^^ i'm adding one new too soon.. called shadows of the past.. story of what happened to viv, while she was trapped in human form.. she didnt run into blu right after she had lost her powers.. theres much more to that time to be told ;D
DRAGONSWINGZZ
2008-04-05 04:22:55
oh f*ck... I actually read this 'cos ppl say you're a good writer... sucks, sucks so much. I mean, even I could write better - and I suck at writing. You really have no idea how terrible that was, do you?
MIMEKO
2008-03-14 05:14:59