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Divided Naruto vs Sasuke

"Wha.....wha.....what type of sick game are you playing here?" asked naruto, stuttering with terror and shock.

"i wasn't playing any sick game untill you turned it into one." he said, calm, as if he knew what they were planing all along.

"How did you-" naruto began but was cuttoff.

"It dosn't take much to overhear a stupid voice like yours from miles away. are you serious? if thats a whisper i sure don't want to know what a scream is." he said with sarcasm. all you naruto fans knows how naruto gets when he is insulted so i don't have to describe his silly face while he points his fingers and tell the man:

"Shut up! you are gonna regret ever insulting us! right sasuke?" naruto asked. ....................................................................................................................................................

"sasuke?" naruto repeated after a moment of silence.

"SASUKE where the hell are you??!!!" he asked, impatient. the man laughed at naruto's sudden fury.

"oh, i didn't tell you? excuse my rude behavior, that light and darkness thing was merely to distract you two while some of my lovely assistants captured sasuke."

"Oh right and i'm just gonna believe that sasuke quietly went along with all this?"

"you don't have to believe. its right in front of your eyes. look over there." the man pointed his finger off into the distance were, sure enough, sasuke was walking away with two girls, although they weren't visible in the dark, you could tell they were awfully cute.

"sasuke! how could you? look at you walking off with the first girls you see! there is just no way! if you were like that you and sakura would have run off a long time ago! sasuke are you listening to me?!!!" naruto screamed all the way for sasuke to hear.

"shut up fool, besides they are cuter than sakura. who cares about my brother? or you? or anyone for that matter? dosn't everyone always say enjoy life while it lasts? well thats what i'm doing." he said. naruto only stared ahead at him with diebelief. what the hell had just happened? they had gone from the perfect plan of rescuing sakura to-.........sakura! where was she? naruto looked around the area for two min........nothing. sakura was no where to be seen. huh? questions ran through naruto's mind. why was sasuke acting so strangely? was that really him leaving him all alone to fight a stranger? would he really just run off with some cute girls? where was sakura? had she left him too? how was he supposed to survive such a strong opponent?

"Well, since you weren't wise enough to join your friends, alive, i guess you'll join the other friends beneath your feet, fool." the man said, inturrupting naruto's thoughts. the man jumped down from the tree in a mere fraction of a sec, as if he hadn't even been up there. he stood behind naruto, leaning down so his cheek was near his face.

"wait a min! you said you came here for sasuke to leave with you for oruchimarru! then why would you let him go like that? and sakura?" asked naruto before them man could do anything.

"you see, those girls maybe cute, but they are no weak enemies. actually, they are both jounin. they are leading sasuke straight to oruchimarru using genjutsu. sasuke isn't really awake. he only seems like it. he is really asleep, dreaming of his parents. as for the girl, i have no clue. she could be dead for all i know."

"what!" screamed naruto.

"i answered your questions, now you can sleep in peace......forever." the man whispered in naruto ear.

"time to kill..............." and also time to answer naruto's last question.........


chapter 9

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i read all 9 chapters and i thought they were super awesome!!! XD cant wait till the next chapter. message me when you post the next chapter.

2007-12-21 14:13:41


awsome but sadish

2007-11-28 16:28:51


awsome but sadish

2007-11-28 16:28:45


that was great!! tell me when the next one is done.

2007-09-22 10:52:32


more!! must read more!! message me^.^

2007-09-16 13:49:34


lol, thanks, i love that you guys like it ^_^

2007-09-15 14:29:57


Naruto-kun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LEAVE MY NARUTO ALONE YOU CREEP WITH UH...BIG HEADS!

2007-09-14 16:29:54


coolness :)

2007-09-13 21:49:03


its ok I've read better

2007-09-11 14:29:41


so cool as ever! message me when you get another one done k?

2007-09-09 17:00:18


awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2007-09-09 11:04:49


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