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Ruse de Guerre 5

PARDON THE GRAMAR!!!!! i wrote in such away i'll understand it to draw it in a manga(digitally of course).....

Midas's old design >>>http://www.tokyopop.com/Song/art/113684.html

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.:."Small World"
Sniper walks on the streets(tanks and military equipment passing by aswell as fancy cars) and greets Kiss who called the sniper Midas Blank. Kiss tells him he seems to be in a bad shape and ask if had lost money in gambling and she wont lend her any money. Midas tells her he didn't go gambling but he needs to borrow money. 'Too bad' Kiss 'Already spent it all to get these invention form mr.einstein-wannabe'. With these words Midas assumes that the repair shop is open then runs off. Kiss wispers to herself 'tsk..didn't even say goodbye properly to a girl'.

Allen counts his finances and found out that he is getting bankrupt. He souldn't had let Kiss off with her charms to fool him. Allen look at a photograph of Him, Izlude and Capulet and remember those peaceful days and he regrets leaving Izlude sleeping since he wouldn't wake up during the evacuation. He prepares to close the store then a Midas slams the door. Allen says hello to Midas Blank. Midas notices Allen(scared) holding a closed signage and asking if he is closing up. Allen hides the signage and says he not closing up. Midas enters the repair shop and unveils his damage druganov rifle. Allen asks him if he had been to a major battle as he observe the rifle. Midas tells there were no major battles yet happening and add about a Lancaster girl which was cute and an informant[Izlude] he got all that in the motion-camera on the scope but seemed to be damaged, he'll need proofs. Allen ask if he got them, that would be good news since that will probably be a big bounty prize and he would be able to pay his debts on Allen, then a thought of claiming the bounty for himself came to Allen since he was bankrupt. Midas tells him he got them that is why he is alive since the Lancaster girl found his position and began to shoot. Allen tells him that the reapair would take a week. Midas got mad but Allen defends that there are other items that need to be repaired that people already paid. Allen asks if he has the money to pay for the repairs. Midas grabs Allen's shirt and tell him he'll pay of course. Midas goes out of the shop slamming the door. As soon as Midas came out Allen locks the door and placed the close signage and got to work quickly on the motion-camera.

As Midas walks on the street he wispers "that twerp probably gonna steal my bounty...i'll just have to take care of him once he finished with the repairs" but for now Midas will look for the informant aswell as some beer and cigar. Allen examines the rifle recorded shot and was shocked to see Izlude alive and found out he escaped. Midas might go after him he tells himself. Then he remember those peacefull days again. But he then thought twice since Allen was with York and Izlude might be a informant for Lancaster. He continue to reason out while remembering the past. Izlude was always insulting him yet he was the only one who would approach him. From their fights in the past he remembers that friends are not enemies even though their view may be diffrent. Then he was reminded he left Izlude during the evacuation and Allen thoughts were of owns Izlude some help. And he set off with an customize grenadier type of AK-47 with a bayonet at front.

Meanwhile Izlude continue to hide in the ruins of the old city. For awhile Izlude saw the battles. Zuzana tanks passing by and exploding and comanche gunships hovering and the deaths. He evaded all this and manage to enter a building. Then Izlude observes the battle acroos a street. He went closer for a better look but a RH-66 Comanche came down at his floor and placed a search light on him. The RH-66 Comanche gatling gun aimed at him. Izlude makes a run for it. The guns fire and Izlude thought he was done for it. Kiss rips appart the rotor blades and engine of the gunship. Kiss lands on the room where Izlude was and the gunship crashes making a firery background for Kiss. Izlude takes a peek of what has happened. Kiss saw him and Izlude's face reminds her of Siege. Kiss calls him Rudee and with a smile she turns on her chainsaw sword and charges on Izlude. Izlude takes out his Bireta pistol and aims for Kiss. But as Izlude was about pull the Trigger a flashback of Song telling him that is it that easyly to kill someone then he holds back thinking he doesnt want to kill anyone or get involve in all of this and that all he wants is to find Isra. Kiss jumps and shouts "Seige, I love...to kill you...).

Then a gunshot hit Kiss's head which had her flying across the room. Did Izlude shoot her no it was Midas. Kiss's head retracted back as roses peel over her forehead then quickly restores back to nornal."That my bounty there Kiss, I wont let you have it" Midas aims his doublebarrel shotgun at kiss. Kiss remember Midas rudeness "I found him first, If you want to fight over then come on!". Kiss charges over Midas as he shoots another shot. Kiss manage to evade it and raised her chainsaw sword and strikes Midas. Midas manage to block the chainsaw sword with his shotgun. Kiss tells Midas that her weapon is special since that twerp Allen Gate had made it. Hearing the name Allen Gate Izlude hopes grew, finally he know someone and the fact that he is alive, he then slowly slip away from the dueling Kiss and Midas. Midas's shotgun slowly gets cut in half. Midas raises his katana as Kiss makes another swing. Midas tells her that this sword is also special bought from a auction and made with a material which he doesnt even know. Indeed the sword did not break like the shotgun. Both of them were in a stealmate as they stand against each other. Then Kiss stop her chainsaw. Midas ask if she's giving up already. Kiss tells him that his bounty has already escaped. Kiss jumps out of the window. Midas shealth his sword and comes out of the room tru the door and slams it. Izlude run on the corners of the city hiding totally out of anyone view and avoid explosions and combats. Within himself he ask how could the people just live with this and killing people that easyly and remembers Song. Kiss jumps around roof tops saying to herself that she has finally found Seige and wont let him get away. Midas just stands at a top of a building.

Izlude stops to take a breath then a silhouette of someone appears in front off him with very bright search light. So Izlude covered his eyes but tried to take a look. Could it be the girl with the chainsaw or the guy with the katana eitherway he's done for it. But there was no sight of fear in Izlude just frustrations of surviving all the way and just give up like that and Izlude stand his ground.


12/24/2007 - added details


Friends meet together again.....how on earth do i make it more suspense...help expert writers

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