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The Bitter Winter Moon

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The Bitter Winter Moon

Winter moon

Sufficated by snow

Muffled by the biting cold

 

I sit on the bridge thinking

While the water trickles by

 

Never wanting to leave

I sob by the river

Wanting this to last forever

 

He looks at me and walks away

As I run home feeling dead

 

He was my everything

My all

I never wanted him to leave

 

But he never forgave me

For ignoring him when he needed me most

 


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This is a poem I wrote in my English class. You guys may not like it but to me this is the best poem I have ever written. I love it!! Some of it reminds me of an experience that I had in the fifth and sixth grade. But I'm over him now. heehee. I have different interests now if you know what I mean. heehee. *Victoria winks at the readers* Please comment!! ^^Or you could pop if you wanted to. But ya know...It's not like I wanted one or anything. You Silly Noobs. heehee. Oh...this is also kind of a Renga. I had to rewrite this one thogh cause the format in this one isn't quite right. haha. Silly me...

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yeah...it is...but it really helped me. thx

07.23.2008 06:42 PM


i loved it its sad

03.26.2008 10:00 AM


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