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Winter moon
Sufficated by snow
Muffled by the biting cold
I sit on the bridge thinking
While the water trickles by
Never wanting to leave
I sob by the river
Wanting this to last forever
He looks at me and walks away
As I run home feeling dead
He was my everything
My all
I never wanted him to leave
But he never forgave me
For ignoring him when he needed me most
yeah...it is...but it really helped me. thx
i loved it its sad
This is a poem I wrote in my English class. You guys may not like it but to me this is the best poem I have ever written. I love it!! Some of it reminds me of an experience that I had in the fifth and sixth grade. But I'm over him now. heehee. I have different interests now if you know what I mean. heehee. *Victoria winks at the readers* Please comment!! ^^Or you could pop if you wanted to. But ya know...It's not like I wanted one or anything. You Silly Noobs. heehee. Oh...this is also kind of a Renga. I had to rewrite this one thogh cause the format in this one isn't quite right. haha. Silly me...