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love never ends 2

Arwin lay in her own blood as John ran to her and cradled her head.''Why did you do that for me?'' Arwins family ran to her.''Dont worry about me guys.'' And a white glow had tken the blood away, but she was still dying. finally she turned to john.''because i love you.'' and her head titled back as she let out her last breath. john screamed and he leaned down and kissed her. the had a gold coffin and a crystal coffin top where you could see her firey red hair and they placed jewels into the gold. they put the seal so tight that her skin would never rot and she would never age. they placed her coffin under a willow tree which bloomed flowers. john looked one last time at his love in her beautiful billowing green dress. a dove came and sat at the left corner above her head. another came and sat at the right corner and together they sang a melody....john lived forever gaurding his young love never leaving her side....people say that when spring comes and the ind blows you can here their voices and the doves still singing that melody.    read my part one. im going to right a book that has this ending.


when the gun went off, who was the one gasping their life away....

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read my first one

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