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Nothing For Me

Always in darkness

Always alone

Running away

No real home

 

The past is something

That I don't want to see

The future's the thing

That holds nothing for me

 

Always in darkness

Always alone

Running away

No reall home

 

Lookning ahead

I only see dread

Looking behind

I see nothing

 

Always in darkness

I lie in a heap

Hoping for dreams

Forever I'll sleep

 

               -Kiley Jahn


This is one of the many poems that I have written in the past couple of days, so read it and let me know what you think. ^_^ ps. it's one of my more depressing ones.

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nicly done. I love this one.

2008-04-15 15:52:10


You'll definitely fit in with any clan!

2008-04-13 09:20:39


NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

2008-04-13 00:44:19


WOW. thats real deep. I think I understand! Depressing? not really.

2008-04-12 15:22:39


i love it so much and thats me there will be nothing for me in the futrue

2008-04-12 14:30:30


I like it^^You're a good poet^^

2008-04-12 11:20:38


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