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Death

Death is something we can't ignore

It's something some can"t wait for

Do you ever think of killing yourself?

Not caring about the life of someone else,

Someone else who doesn't want you to die

But you dont care, even if they cry

Get it over with, end your days walkin in sunshine

Your just next in line of a place i know of

Hell, somewhere you dont want to go

But you can test it, end your life, and the love

The love you experienced, your first love

Trade it for Death if you want to, but that just makes you alone

Death is not something to play with, so keep your life

And wait your fair turn

You'll get it one day,

So there's no need to try.


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This is so good. Awesome job!

2008-06-22 17:57:43


this is really good good job

2008-05-21 14:09:12


*sigh*.....good read

2008-05-20 15:36:45


:O thats good too... ur poems r all really really REALLY good

2008-03-06 22:02:12


nice....i like it....similar 2 stuff i write

2008-02-10 17:49:01


i like

2008-01-23 21:23:20


I like it a lot

2008-01-20 17:15:39


Good. "cracking up". Very good, but i don't want to go to hevean nor hell.

2008-01-20 11:25:38


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